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dry

hoping you'd
return

you did
not

empty
well

Written by buddhakitty

Published 18th May 2018

#funny #heartbroken #rejection

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Re. dry

Ely (E.A.Rothwell)

22nd May 2018 4:56pm

Ooh... I LIKE that!
I envy you your way with words... this piece lends itself to at least three different interpretations that I can see... so far. Ely

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buddhakitty

22nd May 2018 10:33pm

Thank you Ely. I try to strip a poem down to its barest factors in order to expose what is important. Too many words and its meaning can become lost.

Pax
buddhakitty.