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French Tongue
To kiss away, to never tell
The truth of all the lies.
You came to know me very well,
The other times and wives.
The delve of your delectable
Was never meant to sleep
Between my lips impeccable,
Of mouth, the hips, to keep.
My rare perfume’s unholy blend
Where kiss detects the scent,
Belies a virtue’s faithless trend
By lust, my passion spent.
Copyright©️2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 17th May 2018
Author's Note
Written for the DUP competition “kiss”.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re: Re. French Tongue
17th May 2018 9:53am
Re. French Tongue
17th May 2018 1:56pm
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17th May 2018 2:04pm
Re. French Tongue
17th May 2018 3:47pm
ooooooooooooo!
me likey!
I adore your little piece... I can feel the kiss...
tomcat
me likey!
I adore your little piece... I can feel the kiss...
tomcat
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Re: Re. French Tongue
17th May 2018 3:58pm
Re. French Tongue
17th May 2018 5:12pm
Re: Re. French Tongue
17th May 2018 5:28pm
Or “scent”sational? ☺️
Thank you, Lawrence. I appreciate your enjoyment of my poésie du nez érotique!
Thank you, Lawrence. I appreciate your enjoyment of my poésie du nez érotique!
Re. French Tongue
18th May 2018 1:43am
Re: Re. French Tongue
18th May 2018 2:18am
Re. French Tongue
18th May 2018 5:02am
Re: Re. French Tongue
You don’t have to comment if you can’t or don’t want to.
I’ve got a lime-green plastic toy water pistol... I could squirt your ear and maybe an idea will come to you. Hmm?
I’ve got a lime-green plastic toy water pistol... I could squirt your ear and maybe an idea will come to you. Hmm?
Re: Re. French Tongue
18th May 2018 11:45am
Hmm
It is an exceptional poem, notwithstanding moisture in my auditory canal.
It is an exceptional poem, notwithstanding moisture in my auditory canal.
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Fair enough.
Just consider it an 👂🏻🔫👩🏻🔬ear lavage, and I won’t charge you this time.
📝
Just consider it an 👂🏻🔫👩🏻🔬ear lavage, and I won’t charge you this time.
📝
Re. French Tongue
18th May 2018 12:45pm
mother of all that is holy... jadey, this is
such a glorious blend of sensual & sexual
... i am never much of fan of rhyming poetry
but find the lilting scheme adds such teasing notes...
... almost coy :)
really loved this
xx
such a glorious blend of sensual & sexual
... i am never much of fan of rhyming poetry
but find the lilting scheme adds such teasing notes...
... almost coy :)
really loved this
xx
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Thank you, my dear shadoe. I’m glad you gave this one a chance, for you were able to glean every shade of nuance & poet’s Intent from rhyme done right (cadence/rhythm & emote, not “just” rhyme). This is such a gift you’ve given me.
Jadey
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Jadey
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Re. French Tongue
18th May 2018 3:21pm
This is what I call, sexy sensual with a twist :)
Skillfully done.
Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem.
I think i will enjoy reading your work.
Very ecclectic and diverse.
Skillfully done.
Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem.
I think i will enjoy reading your work.
Very ecclectic and diverse.
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Re: Re. French Tongue
18th May 2018 3:42pm
Dear Layla, It’s lovely to see you stop over, and to honor me with your thoughts. It’s so pleasing to have you react like this to my little rhyme of coy & kiss. *giggles @ her unexpected extra rhyme just then*
“Eclectic” is a telling benchmark for what I hope you’ll find & enjoy... in due time.
😇ooh now I did that one on purpose...
I’ll run now, and look forward to seeing you again.
Jadey
🐾
“Eclectic” is a telling benchmark for what I hope you’ll find & enjoy... in due time.
😇ooh now I did that one on purpose...
I’ll run now, and look forward to seeing you again.
Jadey
🐾
Re. French Tongue
19th May 2018 8:35pm
Sophisticated, brilliant and, yes, very erotic. Now I'd better hold my tongue, lest I effuse overmuch.
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Re: Re. French Tongue
26th May 2018 6:07am
*softly chuckles*
Ah my dear crowfly friend, thank you for the embrace of your appreciation. And take care, lest you bruise a useful instrument.
💁🏻♀️👅
Ah my dear crowfly friend, thank you for the embrace of your appreciation. And take care, lest you bruise a useful instrument.
💁🏻♀️👅
Re. French Tongue
26th May 2018 5:53am
Thoroughly and wonderful poetry, sensual/deep and the words roll off the tongue!
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Re: Re. French Tongue
26th May 2018 6:01am
I thank you, silent one, for breaking that silence to let me know how you have embraced my poetic speak.
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30th Oct 2018 00:04am