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13th May 2018 7:36pm
15th May 2018 00:07am
15th May 2018 4:53am
It's definately a hahakookoo....
I admire the dicipline and adherance to form, unique to the Japanese, however I have to take some liberty for myself to make it work. Thanks for your appreciation saxman.
I admire the dicipline and adherance to form, unique to the Japanese, however I have to take some liberty for myself to make it work. Thanks for your appreciation saxman.
15th May 2018 7:58pm
love the depth in this!
yes. but driftwood no more...
perhaps a projecticle on right course!
gem the expression.
yes. but driftwood no more...
perhaps a projecticle on right course!
gem the expression.
15th May 2018 10:01pm
Yes, you are right....driftwood no more.
Maybe poem needs work.
Thanks for input and compliment
Maybe poem needs work.
Thanks for input and compliment
