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Far away
Melting my body with your thoughts
Your hands not placed on my body but in my mind.
I carry around the last time you kissed between my thighs
I shower with visions of you from behind
I can't get you out of my head
Distance only makes my juices crave you
Your lips so soft
Your wood so straight
No matter how far
Our lust won't stray
Because every time we meet you take my breath away
Your hands not placed on my body but in my mind.
I carry around the last time you kissed between my thighs
I shower with visions of you from behind
I can't get you out of my head
Distance only makes my juices crave you
Your lips so soft
Your wood so straight
No matter how far
Our lust won't stray
Because every time we meet you take my breath away
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Re. Far away
3rd May 2018 5:03pm
bite a sweet lemon
and see how quickly he will cum
and coming to DUP
with an opening erotica
welcum
and see how quickly he will cum
and coming to DUP
with an opening erotica
welcum
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Re: Re. Far away
3rd May 2018 5:20pm
Re: Re. Far away
yeah read again's
and see for times to cum
nude you two would remain
happy cummming
we all have been cummming
oftenly
again keeps all
cumming
to and with again again and again you 2
will cum
and see for times to cum
nude you two would remain
happy cummming
we all have been cummming
oftenly
again keeps all
cumming
to and with again again and again you 2
will cum
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Re. Far away
3rd May 2018 6:04pm
I love making love to a woman’s mind before making love to her body. Nice write.
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3rd May 2018 11:32pm
Re. Far away
3rd May 2018 9:27pm
"I shower with visions of you from behind" - reminds me in a way of the potter's wheel session between Demi Moore and Patrick Swayze in the movie Ghost.
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3rd May 2018 11:33pm
Re: Re. Far away
5th May 2018 8:24am
The line inspired a rhyming spin off verse:
I shower with visions of you from behind;
You're absent in body but so much in mind,
Imagining my specimen of mankind
Stirring me up towards that animal grind,
When your manhood my holy G-spot does find
And your arms have me in an unbreaking bind.
I shower with visions of you from behind;
You're absent in body but so much in mind,
Imagining my specimen of mankind
Stirring me up towards that animal grind,
When your manhood my holy G-spot does find
And your arms have me in an unbreaking bind.
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Re. Far away
Anonymous
5th May 2018 3:40pm
Such exquisite words!

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Re. Far away
5th May 2018 11:10pm
Well written. I recognize a better feminine version of a place I keep. The world has balance.
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