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The Zoo
The silence in the room
Roars like a Lion
No need for words
We know the restless creatures
Caged in our minds
Animals don't breed well in captivity
And that is why
The Elephant in the living room
Is about to take a shit
On the couch
Welcome
To the zoo
Roars like a Lion
No need for words
We know the restless creatures
Caged in our minds
Animals don't breed well in captivity
And that is why
The Elephant in the living room
Is about to take a shit
On the couch
Welcome
To the zoo
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Re. The Zoo
1st May 2018 6:06pm
Yes, thoughts not given the light of expression
can end up leaving piles to be continuously
stepped in or walked around.
Nice entry piece.
Welcome to the Deep Under.............
AT
can end up leaving piles to be continuously
stepped in or walked around.
Nice entry piece.
Welcome to the Deep Under.............
AT
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Re: Re. The Zoo
2nd May 2018 3:04am
Re. The Zoo
Welcome to DU
This is a very clever write
brought a smile
Thank you for the read
Al
This is a very clever write
brought a smile
Thank you for the read
Al
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Re. The Zoo
6th May 2018 4:05pm
ahh..amazing
of how, what and how much(less) has been
said, delivered here.
amazing.
the entry work.
yes. loved the absolute crushing of the metaphor
with the reality.
welcome
to the community
deepdown underground.
of how, what and how much(less) has been
said, delivered here.
amazing.
the entry work.
yes. loved the absolute crushing of the metaphor
with the reality.
welcome
to the community
deepdown underground.
1

Re. The Zoo
I see you have a taste & finesse
for irreverence of the humorous kind.
I have a lot of that
running through much of mine,
and I do it in rhyme!😎
And a warm welcome to DUP, my dear!
tiger Jade
🐯🐾
for irreverence of the humorous kind.
I have a lot of that
running through much of mine,
and I do it in rhyme!😎
And a warm welcome to DUP, my dear!
tiger Jade
🐯🐾
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Re: Re. The Zoo
8th May 2018 6:05am