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Loosen’d bondage, silken laces,
Sin in hallow’d satin places,
Tender kisses tasting traces
From her lover’s oral graces.
Drifting dunes like sandy beaches,
What he wants of her he reaches.
In the scent & shade of peaches
Is the sermon that she preaches.
Leaning forward gently touching
Trails of salty tears of weeping.
Render’d lover I am dreaming;
Moon has secret, am I sleeping?
As his breath meets w’ her sighing,
Pressing closest, deepest finding;
Yes, my love, you have me flying
As the moon, with us, is rising.
Copyright©️2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
NaPoGloPoWriMo
Published 30th Apr 2018
Author's Note
This is my Day 30 (and final entry) in this year’s April NaPoWriMo.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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30th Apr 2018 2:26pm
ooooooooooo!
what a wonderful way to send out the WriMo.
Loving it! Tiger
(preach, sister, preach!)
what a wonderful way to send out the WriMo.
Loving it! Tiger
(preach, sister, preach!)
30th Apr 2018 3:11pm
Awww thank you, Tomcat, I'm glad you think so too. When it came to me, so nice, so simple and basic (and just a pleasant little ride), I sat back after typing it up, ready to post and said to myself...
"That'll do, Tig'... that'll do."
"That'll do, Tig'... that'll do."
30th Apr 2018 3:16pm
30th Apr 2018 3:35pm
Oh thank you, gosh, Naajir, that's such a nice little sentiment of enjoyment, of participation in the spirit of my write, and its baptism. :)
1st May 2018 3:16pm
1st May 2018 3:31pm
Why thank you, Lil’D, for coming over, & for the read - glad you like it.
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1st May 2018 7:32pm
Congratulations on completing the comp, Jade! This is a fine climax to winning efforts. I love the wording, and sustained rhymes that never seem forced. First rate!
1st May 2018 9:20pm
Thank you very much, my friend, for your reading, and for letting me read & discuss it with you, r/t.
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2nd May 2018 1:37am
Thank you, dear, how kind of you to say, and for the honor you bestow. May all be well with you.
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2nd May 2018 1:47am
right now my eyes are drooping
what will happen tomorrow
cannot say clearly
hope to be back soonly
to read ur exquiste poetry
ur work is exceptional really
a uniqueeeeeeeeeeeeee
uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
what will happen tomorrow
cannot say clearly
hope to be back soonly
to read ur exquiste poetry
ur work is exceptional really
a uniqueeeeeeeeeeeeee
uuuuuuuuuuuuuu
