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Raw
Raw
Desperate emotions
Rampant … inside me
Growing
Changing me
From within
Once
Bright
Loving
Chasing dreams
Of forever ….
With you
Forever
Changed
By you
Now
Envy
Has taken
Root
Envy
Of her looks
Her smile
Spawned
Jealousy
Of
The way you
Look ... at her
Hold ... her
Kiss ... her
Make love … to her
I’ve
Turned
Bitter
Cold
And yes
Dangerous
Tread … lightly
My dear
Published 26th Apr 2018
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26th Apr 2018 5:09am
there's fire in this...(love the new avatar)...another perfect weave of language...more impressed all the time....Lawrence
26th Apr 2018 5:11am
26th Apr 2018 3:42pm
27th Apr 2018 1:37am
Aww thank you Gawgeous 🌹
For the compliment and the kind words about my poetry.
Always
~Missy ~
For the compliment and the kind words about my poetry.
Always
~Missy ~
26th Apr 2018 5:33pm
Great write ... quick one word lines ... building tempo ... could really feel it
26th Apr 2018 6:20pm
This piece is boiling over with emotion and I wouldn't want to be the gent in the pot. 😱 Brava!
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
26th Apr 2018 7:39pm
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