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With ... or Without You
♥♥♥♥♥♥
When I look at you
My heart skips a beat
When your name crosses my mind
My eyes close in pleasure
It’s not something you do …by design
I doubt you even see me
But, my thoughts and heart strings
Are tied irrevocably to you
Bottled up, deep inside
Never to say them out loud
For fear of what I might see
Reflected in your eyes
♥
When I look at you
My heart skips a beat
When your name crosses my mind
My eyes close in pleasure
It’s not something you do …by design
I doubt you even see me
But, my thoughts and heart strings
Are tied irrevocably to you
Bottled up, deep inside
Never to say them out loud
For fear of what I might see
Reflected in your eyes
♥
Published 24th Apr 2018
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24th Apr 2018 5:47am
the fear of rejection is something many of us have to deal with...love this shorter more succinct verse...much can be said by little...(just finished a poem and read your immediately after...lovely spell)
24th Apr 2018 5:51am
I can’t tell you how delighted I am with your review 🌹
I will watch for your post!!
Always
Justafan
I will watch for your post!!
Always
Justafan
24th Apr 2018 5:55am
It's titled NYMPH...got to record audio, video...will be up tomorrow...up at 5 getting sleepy...
24th Apr 2018 5:58am
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24th Apr 2018 8:12am
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24th Apr 2018 8:18am
I can tell you think before commenting and I love that, John🌹
You honor me with wonderful reviews!
Always
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You honor me with wonderful reviews!
Always
𝒿𝓊𝓈𝓉𝒶𝒻𝒶𝓃
𝓂𝒾𝓈𝓈𝓎🌹
24th Apr 2018 12:03pm
24th Apr 2018 6:46pm
Ahhh a new name in my reviews!!
I appreciate your kind words and rest assured I will venture over and repay the favor 🌹
Always
Justafan
I appreciate your kind words and rest assured I will venture over and repay the favor 🌹
Always
Justafan
24th Apr 2018 8:49pm
24th Apr 2018 3:14pm
Oh ... such confessional vulnerability... with a perfect closing ... *sigh*
24th Apr 2018 6:48pm
Thank you precious for spending a portion of your day leaving this lovely R&R for me🌹
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24th Apr 2018 6:40pm
24th Apr 2018 6:50pm
