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DARK PARADISE
(A repost)
Thoughts of you
permeate my sleep
dreams of me
within you deep
Naked bodies entwine
in green satin sheathed
satisfying every want
curing aching need
Hands caress
every sensuous curve
pleasure awakens
each electric nerve
Kissing your lips
breasts and flower
your natural scent
does me overpower
How glorious we sing
in harmonious climax
spent by the thrill
still conjoined we relax
With sadness I greet
the bright morning light
oh how I yearn
for perpetual night
Thoughts of you
permeate my sleep
dreams of me
within you deep
Naked bodies entwine
in green satin sheathed
satisfying every want
curing aching need
Hands caress
every sensuous curve
pleasure awakens
each electric nerve
Kissing your lips
breasts and flower
your natural scent
does me overpower
How glorious we sing
in harmonious climax
spent by the thrill
still conjoined we relax
With sadness I greet
the bright morning light
oh how I yearn
for perpetual night
Published 19th Apr 2018
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19th Apr 2018 6:30am
A dream in which can also smell as well as see as shown in my favourite verse:
Kissing your lips
breasts and flower
your natural scent
does me overpower
Kissing your lips
breasts and flower
your natural scent
does me overpower
19th Apr 2018 7:15am
Thank you so much Solomon...scent is indeed a powerful thing. Cheers!
19th Apr 2018 6:49am
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19th Apr 2018 8:56am
Beautiful flow, soft gentle rhyme ... "green satin sheathed" ... wonderful lovely poem my sweet
19th Apr 2018 9:04am
Thank you Soledad! I am glad it brought you some pleasure. Somtimes the plumbs are filled with ink :)
19th Apr 2018 9:07am
"Plumbs" ... ya that's kinda of my trademark word. I do love describing balls that way. Full of all kinds of ink ... especially pearly swirly white
19th Apr 2018 9:12am
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20th Apr 2018 9:30pm
Really...the comb-out must be interesting. Like from the back? Might add some nutrients to the hair :)
20th Apr 2018 9:36pm
The secret ... long hot shower with loads of shampoo and conditioner ... of course I do like having to wear the "evidence" for a while ... in my hair ... on my face ... on my boobs ...
20th Apr 2018 9:47pm
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19th Apr 2018 9:24pm
Thank you so much, Mary Jo. I am flattered that you think I am a woman writer that means I'm reaching the feminine reader which I think is a beautiful thing. I am not the goddess but the worshiper thereof :) I hope this won't prevent you from reading my other work. Cheers!
19th Apr 2018 9:24pm
Thank you so much, Mary Jo. I am flattered that you think I am a woman writer that means I'm reaching the feminine reader which I think is a beautiful thing. I am not the goddess but the worshiper thereof :) I hope this won't prevent you from reading my other work. Cheers!
19th Apr 2018 9:43pm
Beautifully composed and a thrill to read, Gahdess! Love the structure, easy rhyme and rhythm. I could use some perpetual night myself. Excellent!
19th Apr 2018 9:46pm
Thank you so much Sir Crow! I should write more Rhyming poems I love the challenge and the flow. Cheers!
19th Apr 2018 9:46pm
Thank you so much Sir Crow! I should write more Rhyming poems I love the challenge and the flow. Cheers!
