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Ode To De' o-do-rant
Sweet the smell,
that well won't tell
the lack of bath
that I've not hath
nor shall I seek
although I reek
from top of head
to end of feet
I've not forgot
these feelings hot
musky odors
from several spots
while in my bed
ho's in my head
or on my knees
as do I please
but I'll not fret
that time's not yet
just look forward
to getting wet
I'll jump and run
when finally done
with dirty things
that are quite fun
it's then I'll shower
douse self with powder
'til once again
I'm like a flower
then grab a chair
and brush my hair
while gazing on
my garden fair
Author's Note
My apologies to all my fellow poets/poetesses, for not keeping up on my comments.
As you may have surmised, I've been gettin' busy,........... down and dirty style, but I'm still reading you and my thoughts are still with this wonderful site.
As you may have surmised, I've been gettin' busy,........... down and dirty style, but I'm still reading you and my thoughts are still with this wonderful site.
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Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
17th Apr 2018 6:12pm
Funny how the mind and hands can be in the dirt, simultaneously. :-)
Thanks by the handfuls, Tim.
Thanks by the handfuls, Tim.
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Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
18th Apr 2018 10:27am
Not easy to sneak up on my astute friend. Yes, an enjoyed indulgence between hoeing around.
Truly appreciate your time, Hans.
Truly appreciate your time, Hans.
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Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
17th Apr 2018 8:37pm
Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
18th Apr 2018 10:53am
Ha, ha...perhaps, but not one I'll be reading my grandson.
Bedtime stories for almost grown-ups. :-))
Your analogy brought another smile, thanks Bob.
Bedtime stories for almost grown-ups. :-))
Your analogy brought another smile, thanks Bob.
Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
18th Apr 2018 6:28pm
To be a smile bringer is a worthwhile occupation. And the pay is incalculable.
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18th Apr 2018 6:44pm
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Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
18th Apr 2018 10:46am
Totally agree, my mind does seem to meander at times, probably due to a lack of concentration and love of daydreaming.
Glad it brought a smile for you as it did me when writing it.
Thank you for the visit and kind words.
Glad it brought a smile for you as it did me when writing it.
Thank you for the visit and kind words.
Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
18th Apr 2018 6:56pm
Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
18th Apr 2018 8:02pm
Awww, Poe I'm normally good for a laugh, either with me or at me,
and I seldom care which.
Truly appreciate that it got one for you, and letting me know.
and I seldom care which.
Truly appreciate that it got one for you, and letting me know.
Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
19th Apr 2018 4:04am
Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
19th Apr 2018 4:42am
Happy to see you taking some time for yourself.
That you found some smiles in this even more so.
Thank you, AtoMik, for your time and RL, both a cake and icing.
That you found some smiles in this even more so.
Thank you, AtoMik, for your time and RL, both a cake and icing.
Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
19th Apr 2018 6:21pm
Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
20th Apr 2018 11:01am
"odoriferous" indeed, I had to quit early, for the flowers were wilting nearly a quickly as my energy. LOL
Many thanks, Daniel, for this the RL on my other.
Many thanks, Daniel, for this the RL on my other.
Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
20th Apr 2018 2:18pm
...and what an ode it is!!
your unique
signature....
style of course
that brings autonomous smiles
and giggles
and i fully concur with Bob above...it indeed is a noble occupation with
pay incalculable- the bringer of smiles!!
and not overlooking
the fact
how well
the poem is done
and delivered!!
kudos!!
your unique
signature....
style of course
that brings autonomous smiles
and giggles
and i fully concur with Bob above...it indeed is a noble occupation with
pay incalculable- the bringer of smiles!!
and not overlooking
the fact
how well
the poem is done
and delivered!!
kudos!!
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Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
20th Apr 2018 3:24pm
I'm pleased it had it's intended affect on you.
It is one of those pieces that somehow the muse nearly writes herself with little help from the poet.
Though much of it came to mind while busying myself in the garden, and being coupled with a seemingly waning short memory, I attempted to write pieces of it in the soil, but that Lazy Susan wouldn't get out of the 2nd stanza. :-))), so, some of it got lost before I could get to my keyboard.
Your kind compliments brought many more smiles for my daily intake, my friend. Thank you so much.
It is one of those pieces that somehow the muse nearly writes herself with little help from the poet.
Though much of it came to mind while busying myself in the garden, and being coupled with a seemingly waning short memory, I attempted to write pieces of it in the soil, but that Lazy Susan wouldn't get out of the 2nd stanza. :-))), so, some of it got lost before I could get to my keyboard.
Your kind compliments brought many more smiles for my daily intake, my friend. Thank you so much.
Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
Goodness gracious tears are flying. Clever, witty and definitely funny, I love the lyrical lightness in it's flow and I definitely needed the joy you bring. Much love and mad respect,
me
me
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Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
4th May 2018 1:31pm
Thank you, my friend. Your words as colorful and delighting as the many hues within my garden.
The joy you return is worth every word of the poem and the RL is like a spring rain.
Blessed I am.
The joy you return is worth every word of the poem and the RL is like a spring rain.
Blessed I am.
Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
13th May 2018 6:42pm
I love this - made me smile so much - reminded me of a gut I shared a flat with and rather than wash his sock and pants he would spray them with De' o-do-rant :-)))))))))
Big Like :-)))))))))))))))))))))))
Big Like :-)))))))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
18th May 2018 10:09pm
Better you should be living in my area, where the flats are outside in the fresh air. lol
Thanks for stopping by, my friend.
:-)))))))))))))))))
Thanks for stopping by, my friend.
:-)))))))))))))))))
Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
30th May 2018 4:30pm
Re: Re. Ode To De' o-do-rant
30th May 2018 5:45pm
I'm pleased you got a smile while roaming my area of DU. Comments such as yours is what makes writing all the more enjoyable.
Thanks for stopping by a parking a comment.
Thanks for stopping by a parking a comment.