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CAELESTIS LÁBIIS
(A repost)
Your sweet sexy lips
slices of heaven
custom made
for maximum pleasure
I live each day
to kiss and suck them
lick and tease them
satisfy our every desire
I pull you close
our bodies are one
your lips feel divine
against mine pressed
tongues exploring deep
Your kisses
fill my muscle full
Feel it on your tummy grow
lips form an alluring smile
as your downward journey begins
leaving your pink stamp
on my hot flesh as a path
tasting my sweat as you go
each tender touch
of your succulent lips
electrifying my soul
I feel your soft fingers
encircle my thick throbbing bliss
now on your knees
your lips christen the glistening tip
with a long single kiss
I cannot contain my profound elation
watching your lips on me move up and down
I feel inside your vocal vibration
moaning louder with determination
as you suck my cream right to the top
not leaving behind one last drop
Filled with joy
lifting you into my tight embrace
kissing those lips
that performed such magic
thrilled by the sight of your face
Your sweet sexy lips
slices of heaven
custom made
for maximum pleasure
I live each day
to kiss and suck them
lick and tease them
satisfy our every desire
I pull you close
our bodies are one
your lips feel divine
against mine pressed
tongues exploring deep
Your kisses
fill my muscle full
Feel it on your tummy grow
lips form an alluring smile
as your downward journey begins
leaving your pink stamp
on my hot flesh as a path
tasting my sweat as you go
each tender touch
of your succulent lips
electrifying my soul
I feel your soft fingers
encircle my thick throbbing bliss
now on your knees
your lips christen the glistening tip
with a long single kiss
I cannot contain my profound elation
watching your lips on me move up and down
I feel inside your vocal vibration
moaning louder with determination
as you suck my cream right to the top
not leaving behind one last drop
Filled with joy
lifting you into my tight embrace
kissing those lips
that performed such magic
thrilled by the sight of your face
Published 17th Apr 2018
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17th Apr 2018 4:34pm
"leaving your pink stamp/on my hot flesh as a path/tasting my sweat as you go" ... love this line. Bravo my sweet poet
17th Apr 2018 4:59pm
Thank you do much, Emily 😂 I'm glad the piece in some way touched you. 💋❤
17th Apr 2018 5:56pm
Not one pornographic word woven into this eloquently composed piece, yet the end result was just as pleasing.
Well done poetic one.
Well done poetic one.
17th Apr 2018 6:25pm
innuendo and metaphors and similes are much more erotic than the crude terms. I am glad it brought you pleasure. I always aim to make the reader feel what I'm feeling. Thank you so much Teri <3 <3
17th Apr 2018 6:38pm
A genuine turn on, each line tantalizing. But these are my favorites:
leaving your pink stamp
on my hot flesh as a path
tasting my sweat as you go
each tender touch
of your succulent lips
electrifying my soul
And this electrifies my thoughts as I read this. Thanks for the thrill Gahdess!
leaving your pink stamp
on my hot flesh as a path
tasting my sweat as you go
each tender touch
of your succulent lips
electrifying my soul
And this electrifies my thoughts as I read this. Thanks for the thrill Gahdess!
17th Apr 2018 6:57pm
You're welcome Sir Crow! Do I write too much erotica? I always appreciate your comments because they come from one with an abundance of talent. Cheers!
17th Apr 2018 7:21pm
If anything I'd like to see more erotica from you, Gahdess. You do it like a master. But then you handle every theme you pursue extremely well.
17th Apr 2018 8:32pm
Thank you again...I try. I think we both share a passion for this stuff.
19th Apr 2018 7:32pm
I agree wholeheartedly with Crowfly On the lines that touched me!
I agree also that you have a remarkable talent for writing Erotica!
Thank you for sharing
Always
Justafan of yours
~M~
I am following you now so I don’t miss anything you write🌹
I agree also that you have a remarkable talent for writing Erotica!
Thank you for sharing
Always
Justafan of yours
~M~
I am following you now so I don’t miss anything you write🌹
19th Apr 2018 8:37pm
Thank you so much Justafan! I appreciate your words of encouragement. I hope the erotica I write is seen as beautiful and not raunchy. I do write in other genres as well and, to tell you the truth, I'm not sure why erotica comes so naturally...I guess it's because it's a natural thing.
19th Apr 2018 8:51pm
19th Apr 2018 9:12pm
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19th Apr 2018 9:51pm
Thank you Mary Jo. It took me awhile to enjoy this kind of thing. I, like you, thought of it as subservience but later found that my partner enjoyed the process (sounds so clinical) :D Your comment is some awesome insight into the feminine mind. as well
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20th May 2023 3:12am
This is a wonderfully sensual poem in itself, "As lips dance upon the tip and then enjoy with delicate sips." That's a yummy comment. I am over the moon that you enjoyed this piece💞
