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The First Thing in the Morning 101
( an erotic Sonnet )
The first thing in the morning when I wake,
I see my lover sleeping at my side.
I sink beneath the sheet his shaft I take
Between my lips and in my mouth I guide.
It’s first thing in the morn’ while dawn is dim,
I hear his shallow breath begin to stir.
I feel the after-warmth so close to him
From tangled naked bodies where we were.
The first thing in the morning is for when,
While everything around is tinted blue,
The scent of love within the lion’s den
We’ll wear upon our skin in all we do.
That we will keep repeating one on one,
The first release of day is never done.
Copyright©️2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
NaPo/GloPoWriMo 2018
The first thing in the morning when I wake,
I see my lover sleeping at my side.
I sink beneath the sheet his shaft I take
Between my lips and in my mouth I guide.
It’s first thing in the morn’ while dawn is dim,
I hear his shallow breath begin to stir.
I feel the after-warmth so close to him
From tangled naked bodies where we were.
The first thing in the morning is for when,
While everything around is tinted blue,
The scent of love within the lion’s den
We’ll wear upon our skin in all we do.
That we will keep repeating one on one,
The first release of day is never done.
Copyright©️2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
NaPo/GloPoWriMo 2018
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 12th Apr 2018
| Edited 29th Aug 2020
Author's Note
This is my Day 12 in this year’s April NaPoWriMo.
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Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
12th Apr 2018 1:03pm
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12th Apr 2018 7:22pm
Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
Anonymous
12th Apr 2018 1:43pm
Mesmerising. I love it. The presentation, the build up and the release. And the smell of the aftermath. Sharp and delicate at the same time.

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Re: Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
12th Apr 2018 7:25pm
My thanks, poet, for such a lovely comment. I’m so pleased how it has touched you.
Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
12th Apr 2018 1:46pm
Ok - well - I'm awake -
I love (The) First Thing in the Morning 101 - the first thing in the morning - one on one...
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Made me... hmmmmm... laugh hard, first thing in the morning...
Great write, tiger queen
I love (The) First Thing in the Morning 101 - the first thing in the morning - one on one...
😏
😮🤔😮
Made me... hmmmmm... laugh hard, first thing in the morning...
Great write, tiger queen
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12th Apr 2018 7:31pm
Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
12th Apr 2018 7:15pm
The first thing in the morning
for most guys says again
is hardened wood
just shake it
simple and pain
for most guys says again
is hardened wood
just shake it
simple and pain
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12th Apr 2018 7:34pm
Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
12th Apr 2018 7:26pm
If this is 101 I'd like to see the advanced version, maybe "The Last Thing at Night." Erotic and (ahem) uplifting. This is immaculately worded and rhymed, Jade. Wish I could do erotica as well as you.
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12th Apr 2018 7:36pm
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13th Apr 2018 4:49am
Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
14th Apr 2018 1:31pm
What an enjoyable way of being woken up. Your words radiate sensuality without having to use vulgar vocabulary.
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
I thank you deeply, dearest Luna, and good morning...
Yes I love to do the majority of my erotic writes using subtle & artistic crafting in the way my poetry expresses. Many of my readers over the years find they enjoy not having what's happening or said directly in their face. And that's how I enjoy it (though there are times I've been more direct but that's usually to fit into a more extreme theme in a competition if I choose to be more frisky :) ).
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Yes I love to do the majority of my erotic writes using subtle & artistic crafting in the way my poetry expresses. Many of my readers over the years find they enjoy not having what's happening or said directly in their face. And that's how I enjoy it (though there are times I've been more direct but that's usually to fit into a more extreme theme in a competition if I choose to be more frisky :) ).
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Re: Re. (The) First Thing in the Morning 101
14th Apr 2018 2:22pm
I'm the same way. I prefer to use my imagination to picture what's happening.
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