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The Ink Within Us
Some they write for they're dismayed,
they pen it down to help it fade
Some will write from beauty seen,
it's all around, to them, it seems
For some no more than a way to share,
so they dump it out and give it air
While others write to garner fame,
to add longevity to their name
No matter if in prose or rhyme,
the only difference, to them, is time.
But in the end, it matters not,
the many reasons for why we jot.
For all we wish of thoughts we spill,
are for others to see and feel.
Brave be the poets who reveal themselves
no matter the gates, be heaven or hell.
Author's Note
Inspired as two members reached 300 days each on DU
in conjunction with reading Alfred, Lord Tennyson's
"The Charge of the Light Brigade"
https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/charge-light-brigade
in conjunction with reading Alfred, Lord Tennyson's
"The Charge of the Light Brigade"
https://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/charge-light-brigade
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Re. The Ink Within Us
11th Apr 2018 2:03pm
My goodness T!!
such astute your observation
nod for every word, line and stanza!
I say ...for one of the poets so well described here... God had kept them a poet since birth, yet only revealed
when the moment arrived.
welcome is the P o e t!
this is beautiful beyond words and has a home inside of a dark place- my heart!
such astute your observation
nod for every word, line and stanza!
I say ...for one of the poets so well described here... God had kept them a poet since birth, yet only revealed
when the moment arrived.
welcome is the P o e t!
this is beautiful beyond words and has a home inside of a dark place- my heart!
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12th Apr 2018 12:39pm
My friend, my kind and thoughtful friend.
Though you say you have a dark heart,
I have found nothing except warmth and
and the light of truth within you, and I will
forever seek the shelter you offer
over the cold light of day.
Thank you for your generous words.
T
Though you say you have a dark heart,
I have found nothing except warmth and
and the light of truth within you, and I will
forever seek the shelter you offer
over the cold light of day.
Thank you for your generous words.
T
Re. The Ink Within Us
Anonymous
11th Apr 2018 3:47pm
I love how you brought all writers into this poem and embraced the lot. A beautiful tribute to writers. Much respect, Poetess :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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12th Apr 2018 12:44pm
Thank you WIllow, how can one not call out the appreciation for all the unselfishness voices here on DU. It was a pure pleasure that these thoughts flowed from my pen for such deserving poets and poetess.
Many thanks for the visit, comment and RL.
Many thanks for the visit, comment and RL.
Re. The Ink Within Us
11th Apr 2018 4:12pm
This is awesome! I fall in perhaps all categories for in my life I have many stories. A perfectly painted portrait of poets and DUP. Brava!
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I believe most do from time to time as our muses traverse our lives, some for reasons more so than others. That we are aware and willing to share our thoughts and experiences is why this site and the writers that inhabit it, is what it is, a haven for all when understanding is needed and shelter is required.
Thank you Bob.
Thank you Bob.
Re. The Ink Within Us
11th Apr 2018 4:26pm
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12th Apr 2018 1:07pm
The magic, the gifts, are presented by the poets and poetesses who roam these halls, spilling their words for all to enjoy or take comfort in, and the subject of those words whether they flow with or against the accepted norms, the bravery of their calling attention to it, is more the meaning within what I have penned here. and it is poetesses such as yourself, I find leading the charge more often than not.
Pen on dear poetesses, pen on.
Pen on dear poetesses, pen on.
Re. The Ink Within Us
11th Apr 2018 7:30pm
Beautifully expressed, as I find myself often questioning the why's of my post's. Love the insight & wisdom I've found in your Poem. Much Love and Mad Respect,
me
me
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12th Apr 2018 1:16pm
Never question the whys, dear friend, for often none of us know the answers, just the need, a need that should never be denied, for even if the answer is not clear to you, rest assured, it will be to some who read it, learn from it, and go away better prepared to face their own trials and tribulations, or recognize the beauty of your thoughts.
Thank you for the kindness you have shown me, Shadow. The RL, a candle, I will never wish extinguished.
Thank you for the kindness you have shown me, Shadow. The RL, a candle, I will never wish extinguished.
Re. The Ink Within Us
12th Apr 2018 00:23am
Lovely cadence and message. An ode to the art. Enjoyed this.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. The Ink Within Us
12th Apr 2018 1:23pm
My dear Daniel, it is poets such as you, who inspired much of this write, for without many of your contributions and others, this would not have been written.
Thank you for allowing us to enjoy the poet within you.
Thank you for allowing us to enjoy the poet within you.
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Re: Re. The Ink Within Us
12th Apr 2018 1:36pm
One would need blinders, not to see the heart and soul many pour into their writing, for the do so without shadowing their words, offering it to whomever is in need or anyone willing to listen.
As I said above, it is the giving souls on here that brought my thoughts to be written here, you of which are always at the forefront.
Thank You Hans.
As I said above, it is the giving souls on here that brought my thoughts to be written here, you of which are always at the forefront.
Thank You Hans.
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13th Apr 2018 7:34pm
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Re. The Ink Within Us
12th Apr 2018 8:05am
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12th Apr 2018 1:39pm
Thank you for your kind words, they are deeply appreciated as always.
Teri
Teri
Re. The Ink Within Us
13th Apr 2018 9:19pm
Exactly right when you say we do it for others to see n feel... For me, it's the satisfaction of givin hope, a smile, or inspiration I enjoy...
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14th Apr 2018 3:34am
Poe, you, like many here, offer a good mix of pieces that as you said, run the gamut from inspiring to entertaining and informing. The talent level you possess in combination with the caring you show, has made a difference for many. It is poets such as yourself, that has kept me and others enjoying the time spent on this site, and looking forward to many more pleasing experiences here.
Thank you, my friend for being so giving in your efforts.
Thank you, my friend for being so giving in your efforts.
Re. The Ink Within Us
13th May 2018 7:05pm
a poet / poets encapsulated - really loved this <3
Brave be the poets who reveal themselves
no matter the gates, be heaven or hell. - - - - a Big AMEN!
Huge Hugsssssssssssss :-)))))))))))))
Brave be the poets who reveal themselves
no matter the gates, be heaven or hell. - - - - a Big AMEN!
Huge Hugsssssssssssss :-)))))))))))))
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15th May 2018 1:36pm
You were one of the poets who came to mind when writing that last stanza, David.
Thank you for all you contribute to DU and the art itself.
Thank you for all you contribute to DU and the art itself.
Re. The Ink Within Us
30th May 2018 4:27pm
Excellent observational piece. i enjoyed the form, the message and the subtle rhyme, well executed.
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30th May 2018 5:40pm