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In Over Your Head
A mince no words, Tyburn poem.
Drinking
Boating
Sinking
Bloating
A fun filled Drinking, Boating time,
caused writing this Sinking, Bloating rhyme
Author's Note
A sad reality, experienced while working 23 years with Law Enforcement officers.
Please, play it safe this summer, dear poets and poetesses.
Please, play it safe this summer, dear poets and poetesses.
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Re. In Over Your Head
24th Mar 2018 12:02pm
All of the stories I've heard over the years of people drinking too much has made me never touch a bottle. Being sober isn't all that bad.
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Re: Re. In Over Your Head
That may be a wise decision,
though I can't say the same for I still
enjoy a cold beer on a hot day, or maybe
a nice glass of wine, in the evening, but it has
been years since I drank too much.
Thank You, runeaxxe. I appreciate your
visit and comment.
though I can't say the same for I still
enjoy a cold beer on a hot day, or maybe
a nice glass of wine, in the evening, but it has
been years since I drank too much.
Thank You, runeaxxe. I appreciate your
visit and comment.
Re. In Over Your Head
24th Mar 2018 12:07pm
for one who never had a sip yet witnessed many a tragedies and close ones affected...
this message couldn't be more effective!!! you delivered some pretty serious stuff here dear Wise Friend! yet with the good amount of humor to get home the message! yes..a slam-dunk in my opinion, this one!!
thank You!! Blessed One!
this message couldn't be more effective!!! you delivered some pretty serious stuff here dear Wise Friend! yet with the good amount of humor to get home the message! yes..a slam-dunk in my opinion, this one!!
thank You!! Blessed One!
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Re: Re. In Over Your Head
25th Mar 2018 9:28pm
My dear friend, I respect your convictions
and truly agree, no good comes from over
indulgence and we both have seen the
destruction which can result.
The first four words were actually from a
Public Service Ad campaign I suggested
many years ago, but was rejected for they
felt it was to harsh, so, I chose to use them
here where minds and stomachs aren't so
squeamish.
Your visit and wise insight always appreciated.
and truly agree, no good comes from over
indulgence and we both have seen the
destruction which can result.
The first four words were actually from a
Public Service Ad campaign I suggested
many years ago, but was rejected for they
felt it was to harsh, so, I chose to use them
here where minds and stomachs aren't so
squeamish.
Your visit and wise insight always appreciated.
Re. In Over Your Head
24th Mar 2018 12:13pm
Re: Re. In Over Your Head
25th Mar 2018 9:33pm
Thank you, poetrician, for your kind words, they're greatly appreciated.
Re. In Over Your Head
24th Mar 2018 3:22pm
sounds like the tipsy done tipped over
diggin you style of conveyance Teri
concise indeed..
no waste of oxygen,thought or ink
diggin you style of conveyance Teri
concise indeed..
no waste of oxygen,thought or ink
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Re: Re. In Over Your Head
I can't remember the last time I was drunk,
(probably not a good thing if it was last night), LOL
and I'm not opposed to moderate imbibing, it's just
I have seen too many life changing tragedies
resulting from a lack of good judgment.
Always pleased when you visit, Sir.
(probably not a good thing if it was last night), LOL
and I'm not opposed to moderate imbibing, it's just
I have seen too many life changing tragedies
resulting from a lack of good judgment.
Always pleased when you visit, Sir.
Re. In Over Your Head
13th May 2018 7:21pm
cleverly and skilfully done - Huge Like :-)))))))))
Huge Hugsssssssssssssssss :-))))))))))))))))))
Huge Hugsssssssssssssssss :-))))))))))))))))))
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Re: Re. In Over Your Head
15th May 2018 1:24pm
Re: Re. In Over Your Head
31st May 2018 7:21pm
Good to get their attention first.
Thank you for your visit and comment.
Also for the RL on the other.
Teri
Thank you for your visit and comment.
Also for the RL on the other.
Teri
Re. In Over Your Head
30th Mar 2021 7:06am
Really like how short this is but it still captures a feeling. Good stuff.
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Re: Re. In Over Your Head
30th Mar 2021 7:38am
Some messages need to be delivered directly in the face.
Thanks for the visit and comment, and also welcome to the Deep Under...
Thanks for the visit and comment, and also welcome to the Deep Under...