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Dreamless
visions of my dreams
of you and her sharing kisses
bodies swaying together
how beautiful her smile
when she looks into your eyes
and you admire the Lady in your arms
unaware of conscience emotions
yearning lips pucker as if she’s me
simple reminder of a tear that it’s not
how haunting are the nights
behind teary closed eyes
as her dreams come true
tears painfully wash mine away
when I feel comfort in darkness
in dreamless silent nights
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
of you and her sharing kisses
bodies swaying together
how beautiful her smile
when she looks into your eyes
and you admire the Lady in your arms
unaware of conscience emotions
yearning lips pucker as if she’s me
simple reminder of a tear that it’s not
how haunting are the nights
behind teary closed eyes
as her dreams come true
tears painfully wash mine away
when I feel comfort in darkness
in dreamless silent nights
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 3rd Apr 2018
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
3rd Apr 2018 9:03am
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4th Apr 2018 3:36pm
Hey ES.......thank you for visiting my ink.......happy to know my words touched you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
3rd Apr 2018 2:40pm
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4th Apr 2018 3:40pm
Hey Lily.......I knew you would feel this.......dreams can be beautiful yet some can be haunting........thank you for smiling upon my page.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Apr 2018 9:40pm
A melancholy but fine write, Flower. No bitterness or jealousy here, maybe resignation. A dreamless night may represent loss to some extent, but there's some peace to be had. Sad but true. Loved this!
4th Apr 2018 3:52pm
Hey Crow........your words are always a comfort........thank you for gracing me with your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th Apr 2018 00:56am
Wow very very nice ! What an ending in this poem of yours ! Can I relate ? Yyeeaahhh !
4th Apr 2018 4:29pm
Hey Robert........sorry you can relate to this........appreciate you smiling upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th Apr 2018 11:06pm
6th Apr 2018 1:16am
Thank you Robert.......I’m honored......tipping my pen to you in respect.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
4th Apr 2018 1:51am
4th Apr 2018 4:31pm
Hey Ahavati........thank you for sharing your sensitive soul with me........always a blessing to you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Apr 2018 9:19pm
beautifully written passion and sadness - sometimes dreamless nights are to be longed for :-))))))
Huge Hugs :-)))))))
Huge Hugs :-)))))))
6th Apr 2018 1:36am
Awe David......appreciate such a sensitive response........I agree....dreamless nights can be a blessing for sure.......thank you for smiling upon my ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
