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HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
Two hearts
Through space and time
Harmoniously beat
Before I knew you, I knew you
My love
Through space and time
Harmoniously beat
Before I knew you, I knew you
My love
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 8th Mar 2018
Author's Note
Image: Swirling Illustrations by James R. Eads
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Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
8th Mar 2018 7:44pm
“Before I knew you, I knew you”
*sighs serenely*
Ah, how well I know this revelation.
And in 7 words.💌
*sighs serenely*
Ah, how well I know this revelation.
And in 7 words.💌
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Re: Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
Thank you so much Jade! That line is the cornerstone to the piece. I thought of it first and then built around it. I am glad that it touched you so.,,,because it did me when I wrote it down.
Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
8th Mar 2018 8:05pm
Re: Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
8th Mar 2018 8:29pm
Thank you Dragonfly! I love when we can be conduits to beauty. I am glad you like this piece.
Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
8th Mar 2018 9:32pm
Beautiful work! I love the reincarnation theme. I just hope I have better luck next time. And, yes, ""Before I knew you, I knew you" is a great line. And it's all a wonder in cinquain.
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Re: Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
8th Mar 2018 11:17pm
hank you Sir Crow! When I first thought of that line I considered it too simple but then it's profundity grew in my mind. Not knowing your circumstance I can do nothing but wish you better luck next time. I sincerely appreciate your constant support of my work,
Cheers!
Cheers!
Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
Anonymous
9th Mar 2018 3:51pm
Such an amorous piece, everything that ever needs to be said right there :)
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Re: Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
9th Mar 2018 4:15pm
Wow! Thank you, Sophie. Words are a powerful thing aren't hey. Thank you for your awesome words of encouragement. If all that needs be said is said then where do I go from here?
Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
27th Mar 2018 10:40pm
I felt the poem title was shouting at me. I like the sense of destined lovers.
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Re: Re. HELLO AGAIN- A poem in cinquain
28th Mar 2018 00:11am
Thank you so much Sir Boring! I am glad the title enticed you to read the piece. Destined love is a beautiful thing to ponder.