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Dear Daniel,

Dear Daniel,  
You should know....  
I always thought of you....  
   
How your deep dark eyes    
They mistified    
Your words to me    
Were like honey    
   
And when you kissed me    
I felt the complete embarrassment    
With the shyest blush upon my cheeks    
You said it was ok    
   
I felt so shocked you even gave me what I wanted    
Deep down    
There is no words that could have Explained  
How happy you made me in the moment    
   
Never knew    
You felt the same way too    
I feel like i messed up our first kiss though....  
Maybe one day a redo?  
   
The butterflies    
So wild in my little girl tummy    
Never imagining    
Someone like me would ever get    
What she wanted    
   
It was hard keeping them at bay    
But as time went by  
And you disappeared...    
I let the butterflies fly  
   
A sweet memory in my thoughts    
Was all I had    
You gave me a memorable experience.....    
And for that    
I thank you  
for one of the best memories I ever had  
 
Written by KrystalG
Published | Edited 21st Feb 2018
Author's Note
Entry to A "HALLMARK" CRUSH compitition. Was a bit last minute but i am proud of what i came up with in such little time. This is one of my favorite poems. It takes me back to a more innocent time. I still think about that moment often because it was the last time i ever saw Daniel. But come to find out years later i actually find him on social media. Frankly he has a girl and i will still probably never see him again but that's ok. I moved on from that. So we just consider each other childhood friends now.
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