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Once upon a...
Once upon a...
you played your part
acting out all of...
the things you said to me
I wonder why I still...
fall for fake loves
and all that's left to do is blame you.
you played your part
acting out all of...
the things you said to me
I wonder why I still...
fall for fake loves
and all that's left to do is blame you.
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Re. Once upon a...
16th Feb 2018 11:55pm
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17th Feb 2018 8:01pm
Wow. I am very impressed and thoroughly enjoyed this poem. I truly feel you pain and relentless pursuit of love
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11th Mar 2018 7:22pm
Re. Once upon a...
16th Feb 2018 11:58pm
This poem reminds me of an old rock song called "Don't Believe A Word" by a band named Thin Lizzy.
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17th Feb 2018 5:17am
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21st Feb 2018 1:52pm
Re. Once upon a...
17th Feb 2018 8:43am
The part, your heart, never stops loving, even when the rest lay shattered within. Loves I knew 40 years ago still linger in my heart, like echoes that bounce back and forth off the cold stone walls of eternity. I suppose that even after death, lost love still occupies the shadow in our souls. We may not see them, but they touch us nevertheless...
Let them be butterflies in the wind, going where the breeze may carry them. Let the brightly colored wings of another be blown into your arms that it may land upon your heart and transform into your knight in shining armor...
J
Let them be butterflies in the wind, going where the breeze may carry them. Let the brightly colored wings of another be blown into your arms that it may land upon your heart and transform into your knight in shining armor...
J
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Re: Re. Once upon a...
21st Feb 2018 1:54pm
I think I may have actually... my shattered heart may or may not be starting to love again. And it loves a man who's been close to my heart for sometime. A man named Ryan :)
Re. Once upon a...
Anonymous
18th Feb 2018 3:45am
Very scenic words. It felt true, and I guess we all play the part.
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Re. Once upon a...
18th Feb 2018 6:59pm