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compromise
no compromise
only fight
was once the motto
engraved
on my bike's front bumper
though today
the attitude remains
much the same
on the outside
something
inside
has undergone
a profound change
today
when life
with
all the successes
has put me in a corner
there
the destruction
of everything around
is the only
way out
trouble is
it is
the surrounds
that i've grown
too fond of
to even think
about touching them
again
it is then
a question
of
deliverance vs severance
severance
is the need of the hour
yet
deliverance is the demand
of the heart
and soul
sometimes
in life
the most fragile
the most vulnerable
the most precious
of the bonds
are the strongest
their fragility
their strength
and tell you what
am too weak
facing
that strength
hence
the compromise
dear life...
you got me
only fight
was once the motto
engraved
on my bike's front bumper
though today
the attitude remains
much the same
on the outside
something
inside
has undergone
a profound change
today
when life
with
all the successes
has put me in a corner
there
the destruction
of everything around
is the only
way out
trouble is
it is
the surrounds
that i've grown
too fond of
to even think
about touching them
again
it is then
a question
of
deliverance vs severance
severance
is the need of the hour
yet
deliverance is the demand
of the heart
and soul
sometimes
in life
the most fragile
the most vulnerable
the most precious
of the bonds
are the strongest
their fragility
their strength
and tell you what
am too weak
facing
that strength
hence
the compromise
dear life...
you got me
Author's Note
a dwelling on & realisation of reality. nothing special, just some ramblings. life is beautiful.
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Re. compromise
Anonymous
13th Feb 2018 2:24pm
Sometimes it feels like what I love most is what is holding me back from feeling fulfilled. And so i sacrifice reaching for that thing for the sake of love. This is what your poem makes me think of.

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Re: Re. compromise
welcome
once again
both
to the community
and the scribble
you're spot on re the deduction of the ink.
personally i would stop shy of calling it a sacrifice for it is what is that has reaped the reward called love.
some say love blinds
i say love binds.
appreciation
deep
for the visit
the rerview
once again
both
to the community
and the scribble
you're spot on re the deduction of the ink.
personally i would stop shy of calling it a sacrifice for it is what is that has reaped the reward called love.
some say love blinds
i say love binds.
appreciation
deep
for the visit
the rerview
Re: Re. compromise
Anonymous
13th Feb 2018 2:43pm
You are welcome. :)

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Re. compromise
13th Feb 2018 4:43pm
"nothing special, just some ramblings. life is beautiful."
No!,..........nothing special,..... VERY special.
When the love of self, is overpowered
by the love of others, returned in like
fashion, no other accomplishments
can replace or equal. No other troubles
can take precedence
Yes............the true meaning of a successful life.
The poet's words, a treasure map to happiness.
No!,..........nothing special,..... VERY special.
When the love of self, is overpowered
by the love of others, returned in like
fashion, no other accomplishments
can replace or equal. No other troubles
can take precedence
Yes............the true meaning of a successful life.
The poet's words, a treasure map to happiness.
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Re: Re. compromise
15th Feb 2018 1:47pm
awwe!
My Friend!!!
wisdom
i say is synonymous
to your name
at least my mind says and sees it
that way!
The Peer's Friendship, the treasure, The Joy!!
My Friend!!!
wisdom
i say is synonymous
to your name
at least my mind says and sees it
that way!
The Peer's Friendship, the treasure, The Joy!!
Re. compromise
14th Feb 2018 10:05am
Life is a balance of beauty and horror of life and death of darkness and of light.
I love the piece, beautiful ramblings, cold, simply beautiful.
~anonshadow
I love the piece, beautiful ramblings, cold, simply beautiful.
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. compromise
15th Feb 2018 1:48pm
Welcome
dear admired Poet!
My Friend!!
appreciate immensely
the affection, the visit
the review!!
dear admired Poet!
My Friend!!
appreciate immensely
the affection, the visit
the review!!
Anonymous
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14th Feb 2018 12:27pm
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Re: Re. compromise
15th Feb 2018 4:13pm
Directly to audioharleea (U. G. Rose)
"as a love that is sure, strong, open, it knows it's value, and won't, (beg at our walls), forever, real love would rather leave one undamaged to live on their own terms before controlling or begging."
The words you have written here, at least to me, and I'm sure many others as well, is a direct on target bull's eye definition of what TRUE LOVE for another is.
The willingness to walk away and leave the one you love alone when they, in good conscience, can not return the same love for you. Anything less is selfish love for ones self.
You have my unequivocal support for your feelings on this matter.
Well spoken, wise poetess.
Teri
"as a love that is sure, strong, open, it knows it's value, and won't, (beg at our walls), forever, real love would rather leave one undamaged to live on their own terms before controlling or begging."
The words you have written here, at least to me, and I'm sure many others as well, is a direct on target bull's eye definition of what TRUE LOVE for another is.
The willingness to walk away and leave the one you love alone when they, in good conscience, can not return the same love for you. Anything less is selfish love for ones self.
You have my unequivocal support for your feelings on this matter.
Well spoken, wise poetess.
Teri
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Re: Re. compromise
19th Feb 2018 12:40pm
Welcome dear AH!
some in-depth review, that left me in awe! yes! bull's eye i say!
these words, you've left here- pure gold, as honestly i would have struggled to put down what and how you have done here! yes, i concur with my wise Friend above (AT) 100%.
Appreciation, gratitude beyond words!
C_F
some in-depth review, that left me in awe! yes! bull's eye i say!
these words, you've left here- pure gold, as honestly i would have struggled to put down what and how you have done here! yes, i concur with my wise Friend above (AT) 100%.
Appreciation, gratitude beyond words!
C_F
Re. compromise
15th Feb 2018 9:54am
Re: Re. compromise
15th Feb 2018 10:59am
admire your take on this ink dear friend.
that's fine, if i come across as arrogant on the outside, believe me it's never my intention, nor my nature. Only the 'take-no-shit' attitude. If people percieve something else, they have every right to their view/opinion.
welcome and appreciate
the feedback & review.
that's fine, if i come across as arrogant on the outside, believe me it's never my intention, nor my nature. Only the 'take-no-shit' attitude. If people percieve something else, they have every right to their view/opinion.
welcome and appreciate
the feedback & review.
Re. compromise
15th Feb 2018 12:10pm
Re: Re. compromise
19th Feb 2018 12:42pm