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Take Me To A Place
Take me to a place
where they're snowflakes in the air
where we can snuggle by the fire
and make worries disappear
The music will be the backdrop
as my eyes just speak to you
true visions ever beautiful
feelings proclaimed anew
A gentle touch upon your cheek
a kiss or two comply
the heat more than the fire
with time just floating by
Take me to a place
where I can see you bare
romance strips the pretense
removing all our fear
where they're snowflakes in the air
where we can snuggle by the fire
and make worries disappear
The music will be the backdrop
as my eyes just speak to you
true visions ever beautiful
feelings proclaimed anew
A gentle touch upon your cheek
a kiss or two comply
the heat more than the fire
with time just floating by
Take me to a place
where I can see you bare
romance strips the pretense
removing all our fear
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Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 3:21pm
your love is something truly beautiful to behold
it shows in the romantic touches in this write..
love Raven
it shows in the romantic touches in this write..
love Raven
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Re: Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 4:37pm
Re. Take Me To A Place
Anonymous
9th Feb 2018 3:29pm
Such beautiful imagery, so dreamy...
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Re: Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 4:38pm
Re. Take Me To A Place
Anonymous
9th Feb 2018 3:32pm
Okay, that is a definite keeper for me. What a dreamy moment you've painted here, Tim. Love the beautiful romance in this one. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 4:39pm
Thank you my beautiful friend. We all crave that special someone to share these moments. 🤗
Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 4:43pm
I just follow your words to the places...they are so beautiful. My favorite lines:
"The music will be the backdrop
as my eyes just speak to you"
Definitely intoxicating!!
much love
RoseJasmine
"The music will be the backdrop
as my eyes just speak to you"
Definitely intoxicating!!
much love
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 5:57pm
Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 5:48pm
dearest Tim your love poems
make me melt
they burn with passion..
this is gorgeous..
your pen is so romantic..
love Brenda
make me melt
they burn with passion..
this is gorgeous..
your pen is so romantic..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Take Me To A Place
9th Feb 2018 5:58pm
Thank you my beautiful Brenda. You can join me on my romantic journey anytime. ❤
Re. Take Me To A Place
11th Feb 2018 7:22pm
You write with ease yet reveal deeper meanings of what it is to need someone special.
Love it.
Love it.
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Re. Take Me To A Place
27th Mar 2018 10:33pm
the rhythm felt rough in the 3rd stanza. i like the setting introduced in the 1st stanza.
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