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A Short Concise History From The Paris Commune To The Present
Collective vision
attempts actualization
A 'happy-go-lucky' "I" triumphs
gets cooked thoroughly
Served is the alienated 'self', unsustainable
shredded in a thousand pieces
each piece a tear
A thousand tears of a thousand flavors
splitting speedily to sand atoms
Closing the window to freedom
opening the gate to nothingness and less...
attempts actualization
A 'happy-go-lucky' "I" triumphs
gets cooked thoroughly
Served is the alienated 'self', unsustainable
shredded in a thousand pieces
each piece a tear
A thousand tears of a thousand flavors
splitting speedily to sand atoms
Closing the window to freedom
opening the gate to nothingness and less...
Published 8th Feb 2018
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20th Feb 2018 1:50pm
The ego is its own monster, Takis. Once the beast is heartily fed, there's rarely a coming back. . .
20th Feb 2018 2:54pm
Thank you for your comment! You're probably right.
The biggest concern lies on the fact that this 'ego' has split itself in so many pieces that, it, too, rarely can manifest a consistent singularity.
The biggest concern lies on the fact that this 'ego' has split itself in so many pieces that, it, too, rarely can manifest a consistent singularity.
