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Looking at the Better
Looking towards tomorrow,
not the burn of yesterdays
sorrow.
Shinning like
sunlight, boldy burning at
midnight.
Finally moving on, glad
that we're done and your gone.
Striding forward not looking
back, the burden of you pressence
i no longer pack.
My heart pounding in my
chest, knowing im doing good,
my best.
Completely forgetting you,
is exactly what i plan to do!
not the burn of yesterdays
sorrow.
Shinning like
sunlight, boldy burning at
midnight.
Finally moving on, glad
that we're done and your gone.
Striding forward not looking
back, the burden of you pressence
i no longer pack.
My heart pounding in my
chest, knowing im doing good,
my best.
Completely forgetting you,
is exactly what i plan to do!
Published 29th Sep 2011
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29th Sep 2011 8:34pm
29th Sep 2011 9:28pm
i wish you thebest of luck darling, sadly no matter who im with you wont be forgotten...the joy you brought...nor the excrutiating pain and despair. Best wishes
30th Sep 2011 00:08am
1. thanks :)
2. Thanks hun, means alot, you too. be good and keep your head up,oh and this isnt about you, i wrote it along time ago, many reasons i will NEVER forget you, good and bad i suppose.
2. Thanks hun, means alot, you too. be good and keep your head up,oh and this isnt about you, i wrote it along time ago, many reasons i will NEVER forget you, good and bad i suppose.
