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soul journeyer
within the torment
of a poet's soul
is an aged whiskey
mellow & old
it burns going down
then becomes a glowing warmth
get intoxicated on our verse
the spirit of the poet
is laced inside these powerful words
witness our warrior soul
loosed on the page
all the beauty & the ache
our anger a killer
if you're a beginner please refrain
sip the juices of an erotic
giggles, I dare you
after walk a straight line
the lust & love in us so beguiling
our poetry casts a spell,
charmed we succumb
then there are the rare gems
beautiful soul journeyers
the fates witnessed us separate
& saw fit to bring as one
this is your empath family
the gods own chosen
you are gifted to walk
this journey with them
now, until the very end
*edited & reposted
Written by
smackdownraven
Published 18th Jan 2018
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Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 12:46pm
Pretty much nailed it here my sweetness, Yup a poet's soul, forever on a journey....
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 12:53pm
thank you dearest Poe as poets we are blessed to journey together..
love Raven
love Raven
Re. soul journeyer
Anonymous
18th Jan 2018 1:42pm
So true, and so beautiful! Let’s enjoy the journey together.....
Xo
Xo

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Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 4:38pm
thank you graciously beautiful Star so honored to have you at my side..
love Raven
love Raven
Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 4:26pm
Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 4:39pm
thank you graciously beautiful Jade for the love on this write..
love Raven
love Raven
Re. soul journeyer
Anonymous
18th Jan 2018 4:42pm
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 4:48pm
thank you dearest Ghost for the love & understanding you've shown this write.. this one gave me some trouble as it came out in a flood of thoughts I posted it originally then had to pull it & do more editing.. i'm happy with it now & so pleased you enjoyed the message.. may we journey onward together :)
love Raven
love Raven
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18th Jan 2018 4:55pm
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 4:59pm
thank you Ghost yes I know you speak from a place of honesty.. the first one was just a bit muddy in places good but the flow was off when reading it out loud.. you made my day brighter with the love you've shown this write..
love Raven
love Raven
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18th Jan 2018 5:02pm
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Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 6:58pm
A journey unlike any other
expressed magnificently through the quill of a
genuine compassionate soul...
your words inspire and endear Raven..
expressed magnificently through the quill of a
genuine compassionate soul...
your words inspire and endear Raven..
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 7:02pm
thank you dearest Soul Soldier
for such a beautiful comment
you made this day brighter & gifted me smiles :)
I love making this journey with you beautiful poets..
love Raven
for such a beautiful comment
you made this day brighter & gifted me smiles :)
I love making this journey with you beautiful poets..
love Raven
Re. soul journeyer
Anonymous
18th Jan 2018 8:22pm
Oh Raven, this is divine! I'll be taking this one home with me, please. I love it!!
...Willow
...Willow

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Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 8:29pm
thank you beautiful Willow i'm so happy this one spoke to you.. I wrestled with this all night because it came pouring forth & I had to put it in some kind of flowing order lol :)
love Raven
love Raven
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Anonymous
18th Jan 2018 8:30pm
It flows! So sweet and smooth and perfectly it flows. :-)

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Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 8:31pm
This certainly casts a spell, and I'm captivated. I particularly like the "empath family", who can be closer than blood relations. It's a journey well-taken.
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
18th Jan 2018 8:41pm
thank you graciously dearest poet.. I feel as poets we are so very intimately connected..
love Raven
love Raven
Re. soul journeyer
Anonymous
18th Jan 2018 10:34pm
Darkest Raven, the sentiment held within this ink is just lovely...it bring some warm fuzzies and the softest heartfelt grins...you have nailed this without a doubt...I will need to capture this...please and thank you
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn

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Re: Re. soul journeyer
20th Jan 2018 00:25am
thank you beautiful Taryn for such a beautiful comment i'm so happy this poem touched you.. I firmly believe we are gifted soul journeyers..
love Raven
love Raven
Re. soul journeyer
20th Jan 2018 00:39am
truly a "POET" encapsulated - I really feel this one it fucks gently with my reality and makes me question - you are inspirational
hugest of Hugs :-)))))))))))))
hugest of Hugs :-)))))))))))))
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
20th Jan 2018 00:43am
thank you dearest David yeah I think the fates brought us together here for a purpose.. we move each other through verse so deeply if gifted we come across soul journeyers who stay with us until the end.. i'm happy to make you question..
love Raven
love Raven
Re. soul journeyer
20th Jan 2018 12:20pm
though this reader's journey
may end any moment
it is indeed soothing
to have been a witness
to such a journey.
expression: gem
of gems.
job dear Friend!
may end any moment
it is indeed soothing
to have been a witness
to such a journey.
expression: gem
of gems.
job dear Friend!
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
20th Jan 2018 4:49pm
Re. soul journeyer
7th Aug 2018 7:29pm
poetic purity
excavating soulful renditions
damn how these words haunt the quill
excavating soulful renditions
damn how these words haunt the quill
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Re: Re. soul journeyer
thank you dearest Soul Soldier for feeling this write so deeply it's a special one to me....
love me
love me