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She Wept
She grabbed his swollen member from under the sheet
it was hard and erect
She loved touching him, softly, clear down to his feet.
His skin was so soft and she never tired of him
He was delicious and smelled so good
He moaned in ecstasy as she sucked his manhood, waiting for the prelim.
She was so very wet as she straddled on top
He grabbed her waist and grinded her deep
Her hair was beautiful as she rode him nonstop.
She knew the moment that he came
He moaned and grabbed her ass
Sucked on her hard nipples and said her name.
He pushed her onto her back
Slid his fingers inside of her
Moved them around to give way for her orgasm
Dropped to his knees and tasted all that was his
She never stopped pleasing him until all went black.
Then they cuddled and slept
He held her close and whispered in her ear
"Don't leave. Stay." She nestled into him and while he was asleep, she wept.
it was hard and erect
She loved touching him, softly, clear down to his feet.
His skin was so soft and she never tired of him
He was delicious and smelled so good
He moaned in ecstasy as she sucked his manhood, waiting for the prelim.
She was so very wet as she straddled on top
He grabbed her waist and grinded her deep
Her hair was beautiful as she rode him nonstop.
She knew the moment that he came
He moaned and grabbed her ass
Sucked on her hard nipples and said her name.
He pushed her onto her back
Slid his fingers inside of her
Moved them around to give way for her orgasm
Dropped to his knees and tasted all that was his
She never stopped pleasing him until all went black.
Then they cuddled and slept
He held her close and whispered in her ear
"Don't leave. Stay." She nestled into him and while he was asleep, she wept.
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Re. She Wept
18th Jan 2018 5:52am
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18th Jan 2018 5:53am
Re. She Wept
18th Jan 2018 6:44am
I enjoy this but I don't understand the females emotions. Maybe they aren't there?
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Her crying? Could be for many reasons. She could be happy that he asked her to stay. Sad because she could be taking a risk of her husband or bf finding out that she has a lover. Crying because maybe she knows she will never see him again. I am glad you liked it.
Quinn
Quinn
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18th Jan 2018 7:11am
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18th Jan 2018 7:14am
You are so welcome, Mace. Look forward to seeing you some more. Quinn
Re. She Wept
19th Jan 2018 12:47pm
Loved every piece of it your erotic poetry mans a man hard and happy 😊
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Re. She Wept
19th Jan 2018 7:07pm
is this the challenge poem
Looks like it he came much too much ahead
that's why she wept as he slept No.......
Looks like it he came much too much ahead
that's why she wept as he slept No.......
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19th Jan 2018 7:35pm
No, women cry for different reasons, again. That's the beauty of poetry. Imagination. Feelings. Senses. Glad you liked it. Quinn
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Anonymous
2nd Feb 2018 2:27pm
Well written in so many ways this was so lovely
U r talented
U r talented
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5th Feb 2018 12:19pm
She wept!! May be it was her first time...may be that man is a soldier ready to leave for war next morning...what I felt is that she either had it for first or last time with him.
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5th Feb 2018 1:07pm
I am glad you enjoyed it. I love to write poetry that have a certain twist to them. Hugs Quinn
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Re: Re. She Wept
6th Feb 2018 9:05am
So glad you liked it. It is supposed to melt your heart! Lol. Hugs Quinn
Re. She Wept
22nd Mar 2018 9:53pm
After seeing the explanations by you, and another reader, as to why she wept, it gives the poem a poignancy of moment. Perhaps the sex is "sweet and stolen", or in a circumstance where it might not happen again. It reads as proverbial 'carpe diem' sex, as the couple seize each other.
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Re. She Wept
23rd Mar 2018 4:24am
Thank you, Solomon and Nashum. I am glad you liked this writing. Hugs Quinn