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Until I Die
I want to be collared by one
He must be kind and loyal
True to me, every boundary won.
For I want to be obedient to him
I want to serve him only
Look in his eyes and see the pride
That only I
Have created, have placed, have made him royal
I am his and he is mine
I will care for him, love him, hold him close, be his slave, his woman until I die.
He must be kind and loyal
True to me, every boundary won.
For I want to be obedient to him
I want to serve him only
Look in his eyes and see the pride
That only I
Have created, have placed, have made him royal
I am his and he is mine
I will care for him, love him, hold him close, be his slave, his woman until I die.
Published 16th Jan 2018
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I LOVE how well you've conveyed the power that a submissive partner can wield: "the pride
That only I
Have created, have placed, have made him royal[!]" Many people miss this aspect of the Dom-sub dynamic.
That only I
Have created, have placed, have made him royal[!]" Many people miss this aspect of the Dom-sub dynamic.
19th Mar 2018 2:49pm
