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Warmth
Gliding through the surreal scape of my heart surrounded by stone walls thirty feet tall that may never fall to the empty husks of thoughts.
Feelings of regret for a closed off nature plague me still.
Falling, as I am.
It's been awhile since I've had another join me behind these walls I've built.
Wait.. What is that?
Warmth.
Feelings of regret for a closed off nature plague me still.
Falling, as I am.
It's been awhile since I've had another join me behind these walls I've built.
Wait.. What is that?
Warmth.
Published 14th Jan 2018
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14th Jan 2018 2:21pm
The first line has a lovely flow, I do recommend adding punctuation in the first and second lines to make it read better. Overall, I enjoyed :)
15th Jan 2018 1:11pm
Thank you! I'll be sure to be more careful about that in general c: I appreciate the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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15th Jan 2018 10:45pm
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