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Dark Temptation
he emerged ...
Dark and menacing
under a pitch black curtain
of mist, bathed in ritual smoke
he stood ...
In a world of darkness,
where the angels can’t shield you
and chastity doesn’t exist
he listened ...
echos of her desperation vibrating
under a black gloved hand
his body surged into hers
he whispered ….
the narcotic power
of his voice, like the liquid
green oblivion of absinthe, maddened her
he pushed ...
her mind, her body past the edge
taking her ... over ...and ... over
deliberately stretching her
tampering with her sanity
he took ...
them to the aphotic zone
of the fiercest ocean,
cloaked in his darkness
where the spell of her
morality
was
broken
Dark and menacing
under a pitch black curtain
of mist, bathed in ritual smoke
he stood ...
In a world of darkness,
where the angels can’t shield you
and chastity doesn’t exist
he listened ...
echos of her desperation vibrating
under a black gloved hand
his body surged into hers
he whispered ….
the narcotic power
of his voice, like the liquid
green oblivion of absinthe, maddened her
he pushed ...
her mind, her body past the edge
taking her ... over ...and ... over
deliberately stretching her
tampering with her sanity
he took ...
them to the aphotic zone
of the fiercest ocean,
cloaked in his darkness
where the spell of her
morality
was
broken
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Re. Dark Temptation
13th Jan 2018 8:31pm
An intense setting of the scene...
dark and menacing
"In a world of darkness,
where the angels can’t shield you
and chastity doesn’t exist
he listened ... "
nicee
<3
H
dark and menacing
"In a world of darkness,
where the angels can’t shield you
and chastity doesn’t exist
he listened ... "
nicee
<3
H
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Re: Re. Dark Temptation
13th Jan 2018 9:11pm
Thank you love ... so happy you were able to see through my darkness
As airways you comments, and visits are welcome
🌹
As airways you comments, and visits are welcome
🌹
Re. Dark Temptation
14th Jan 2018 7:47pm
"he pushed ...
her mind, her body past the edge
taking her ... over ...and ... over
deliberately stretching her
tampering with her sanity"
dearest Wicked One
such a dark scribe
so much power a Master wields
its makes one tremble..
beautifully dark & deep..
love Crim
her mind, her body past the edge
taking her ... over ...and ... over
deliberately stretching her
tampering with her sanity"
dearest Wicked One
such a dark scribe
so much power a Master wields
its makes one tremble..
beautifully dark & deep..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Dark Temptation
14th Jan 2018 8:08pm
My dear poetess
You honor me ... there are very few who could rival the ink that spills from your dark mind 🌹
With deepest admiration,
~W
You honor me ... there are very few who could rival the ink that spills from your dark mind 🌹
With deepest admiration,
~W
Re. Dark Temptation
Anonymous
16th Jan 2018 6:04am
Tempting. You and your wicked ways lol. Great piece!
Respectively,
Beth
Respectively,
Beth

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Re: Re. Dark Temptation
16th Jan 2018 11:00pm
My dear Beth, so happy you found it “ tempting,”
as was my intention 😈
Thanks for you visit, and you comment
~W
as was my intention 😈
Thanks for you visit, and you comment
~W
Re. Dark Temptation
18th Jan 2018 7:52pm
Wow, captivated me with such alluring images of the darkness.
Enjoyed :)
Enjoyed :)
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Re: Re. Dark Temptation
21st Jan 2018 1:12pm
Thank you so much for stopping by, and for your sweet comment. I enjoy your ink immensely ... your visits are always welcome 🌹
~Wicked
~Wicked
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Re. Dark Temptation
8th Feb 2018 6:25am
My dear Avalon, you have no idea how much I welcome, and appreciate your visits. I love how easily you connect with my pen ... especially since you are seeing this from a such a different perspective. 🌹
As always,
~Wicked
As always,
~Wicked
Re. Dark Temptation
8th Feb 2018 6:26am
My dear Avalon, you have no idea how much I welcome, and appreciate your visits. I love how easily you connect with my pen ... especially since you are seeing this from a such a different perspective. 🌹
As always,
~Wicked
As always,
~Wicked
Re. Dark Temptation
9th Feb 2018 6:31pm
oh goodness
that was uhm... intense...
i adore the diction, really great lines throughout.
good to read you again, lucifer
that was uhm... intense...
i adore the diction, really great lines throughout.
good to read you again, lucifer
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Re: Re. Dark Temptation
7th Mar 2018 3:37pm
Thank you Lucifer, for your kind words ... so glad you enjoyed the read.
Wicked
Wicked
Re. Dark Temptation
5th Mar 2018 8:50pm
"morality/was/broken" - such powerful sexiness in this. Bravo my dear poet, bravo!
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Re. Dark Temptation
7th Mar 2018 3:45pm
My dear Dragonfly
I so look forward to your visits , as well as your comments .
Thanks for stopping by
Wicked
I so look forward to your visits , as well as your comments .
Thanks for stopping by
Wicked
Re. Dark Temptation
Awesome write! Very dark and incredibly descriptive. Reminds me of some of the stuff I used to write... Anyway, I quite enjoyed it.
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Re. Dark Temptation
6th Jan 2019 4:06am
Thank you for reading ... I’m glad you could reIate. I look forward to reading your poetry
~W
~W