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The Raped Pages
inside the sacred gardens
of mind & soul
you pilfered the sanctity of hidden dreams
put your grudging hands on them
& staked these for your very own
in a deluded state you gloried,
my journey
you trekked unscathed
having never kissed agony
you know not his name
heroin's poison my taint
you lay claim to opium's phallus
while it was yet inside me
with callous eyes
you raped my poetry pages
copied then pasted
took credit for my pleasure, my pain
i went through hell to know Lucifer
you had nerve to steal
from his dark book as well
if you aren't afraid of the law
you should know this,
my demons see you
& know where you dwell
they're coming to hang a thief
you will begin to notice
your life coming apart at the seams
you messed with a demented bitch
fucking with me
my name is Crimsin
or lady dark
as i am fondly called
legion my protectors
they're preparing for war
*note to a plagiarist
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Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 3:10am
Damn..I'm so sorry dear, some people are just frikin scum, how dare anyone steal your soul.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:30pm
thank you Tim yes it's affected me deeply
for the first few days I wondered
if I would continue to write
I was so disgusted..
love Brenda
for the first few days I wondered
if I would continue to write
I was so disgusted..
love Brenda
Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 3:29am
I stand beside, Dear Lady Crimson. Fucking sad pathetic no imagination having motherfucker. If you can't write for yourself then go and suck off Daddy. That's probably what they're good at and then let us hear your pain. Until you expose yourself as a fraud, plagiarist and apologize for having no talent yourself and am guilty as a common thief, well I say this, Plagiarist, you have my invitation to fuck off.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:32pm
thank you dearest Lord Hades for standing with me
& for tell this person off in a way I couldn't you made me smile :)
love Crimsin
& for tell this person off in a way I couldn't you made me smile :)
love Crimsin
Re. The Raped Pages
"they're coming to hang a thief
you will begin to notice
your life coming apart at the seams
you messed with a demented bitch
fucking with me
my name is Crimsin
or lady dark
as i am fondly called
legion my protectors
they're preparing for war"
and the dark angel,..then ...cleft them in twain!!!
give 'em hell my glorious spirit warrior//
all will balance in the end...since the judge created the scales...
loving.. in the deep end on this power feline manifesto grande' rootin' tootin'...thank you my dearest
Jeff
you will begin to notice
your life coming apart at the seams
you messed with a demented bitch
fucking with me
my name is Crimsin
or lady dark
as i am fondly called
legion my protectors
they're preparing for war"
and the dark angel,..then ...cleft them in twain!!!
give 'em hell my glorious spirit warrior//
all will balance in the end...since the judge created the scales...
loving.. in the deep end on this power feline manifesto grande' rootin' tootin'...thank you my dearest
Jeff
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:33pm
Re. The Raped Pages
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 3:57am
my love, one of the fiercest writes yet...coming into your domain and trying to stake claim....it is obvious this talentless asshole didn't know who they were screwing with...I am so happy this was resolved and they have been exposed for the fraud and thief they are...titty bumps and kisses all over you!!
I love you madly, deeply, fiercely
yours always & forever & ever & ever
xoxoxox Love Taryn
I love you madly, deeply, fiercely
yours always & forever & ever & ever
xoxoxox Love Taryn
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:10am
Titty bumps, hmmm sounds intriguing. I was thinking of mouth hugs earlier. Lol.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
thank you my love without you I would have been blindly unaware I was being ripped off & without your help it wouldn't have been stopped..giggles @ titty bumps :)
I love you wildly..
love Brenda
I love you wildly..
love Brenda
Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:40pm
Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 4:54am
Great write for plagiarism crimson
I'm sorry to hear if someone actually stole your work and tried to pass it off as their own.I hope no one poet or poetess ever has that happen to them..heart wrenching .
That makes me wonder if its ever happened to me and I just don't know it.
Very thought provoking piece.
I'm sorry to hear if someone actually stole your work and tried to pass it off as their own.I hope no one poet or poetess ever has that happen to them..heart wrenching .
That makes me wonder if its ever happened to me and I just don't know it.
Very thought provoking piece.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:39pm
thank you dearest Samael someone stole over 100 poems of mine & posted them a Hindu dude pretending to be a girl..Taryn discovered them get with her if you're interested in knowing how she found them something about looking up the first sentence in your poems..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:07pm
http://www.plagiarismchecker.com
This site is used by professor's to check students work but it also comes in handy for finding your work out there. I can tell you that many of our poems are used for classroom assingments as examples in presentations which is fine and the author is always mentioned but then there is the scum who have no creative and use others work as means of stalking or preying on others.
This site is used by professor's to check students work but it also comes in handy for finding your work out there. I can tell you that many of our poems are used for classroom assingments as examples in presentations which is fine and the author is always mentioned but then there is the scum who have no creative and use others work as means of stalking or preying on others.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:11pm
thank you dearest Tim unfortunately Taryn & I found especially with my poems say from 2011 they didn't show on the plagiarism check & he had stole those as well posting them as his own in 2017..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
13th Jan 2018 00:16am
The craziest thing with this Tim, was through their own app there is a menu option for “Plagiarism Check” and unfortunately, it seems that when the title is included, in some cases, they don’t show up. I also noticed if the write is older it takes longer to find within the pages generated by the checker. I suppose if one goes to the checker themselves and just enters the first few lines it may generate correctly, I’m not sure as I’ve yet to try the link you’ve generously provided (thank you btw 😊) - I will check it out!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
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Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:08am
Dear Crim...
This is eloquent and moving. I find some poets only have one or the other quality, but you embody both, with a dark edge <3 I'm struck. Truly!
"you pilfered the sanctity of hidden dreams" This fucking kills it!
"you had nerve to steal
from his dark book as well " magnificent!
It's been quite some time, but I've had poems stolen in the past. It's enough to drive you insane.
This is eloquent and moving. I find some poets only have one or the other quality, but you embody both, with a dark edge <3 I'm struck. Truly!
"you pilfered the sanctity of hidden dreams" This fucking kills it!
"you had nerve to steal
from his dark book as well " magnificent!
It's been quite some time, but I've had poems stolen in the past. It's enough to drive you insane.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:41pm
thank you beautiful Atomik for feeling my pain & darkness of this poem i'm sorry you've suffered this as well..
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 8:25am
i wrote one a while ago for my own personal plagiarist (who not only steals but butchers my poems) who is still happily at it.
a lot of the time, its not only the act of stealing but the laying claim of experiences, of pain, of lust, of addiction... that someone can pervert our emotional bleeding for a few likes & comments from strangers. it's a pitiful thing. & the fact that there's little to no legal recourse is incredibly frustrating.
you did a stellar job writing this one, highly emotive & filled with righteous anger.
love ya heaps
xoxox
a lot of the time, its not only the act of stealing but the laying claim of experiences, of pain, of lust, of addiction... that someone can pervert our emotional bleeding for a few likes & comments from strangers. it's a pitiful thing. & the fact that there's little to no legal recourse is incredibly frustrating.
you did a stellar job writing this one, highly emotive & filled with righteous anger.
love ya heaps
xoxox
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:46pm
thank you beautiful one this guy basically copy pasted my entire poems titles & all.. as well as butchering two of them.. then in comment claimed on one of my heroin poems it was their life,, it really fucking pissed me off..
I love you beautiful I feel for your pain & frustration..
love Brenda
I love you beautiful I feel for your pain & frustration..
love Brenda
Re. The Raped Pages
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 8:26am
Wonderful write Crim, although the content is saddening as I saw your poems were stolen. I’m so sorry this happened to you, and I’m glad the site has taken everything down. As for the person, it is sad that they lack the imagination needed to create their own poetry and have to resort to stealing. Karma is a bitch! Xo
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:53pm
thank you beautiful Star for feeling my grief
I think this person to be a very delusional being
& that is truly sad indeed..
love Crimsin
I think this person to be a very delusional being
& that is truly sad indeed..
love Crimsin
Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 9:04am
the wretched envy that resides
those empty vagabonds
must be an internal ache that knows no end..
..
this thief...no ...this soul snatcher
is the literal definition of what it is to be
shameless and gutless..
a sub-human indeed
vilest of the vile..
..
i feel your angst Crim..
they came for me twice already..
...
folks like that need spiked anal beads shoved up their rectum
and pulled out slowly..
one hour at a time...
those empty vagabonds
must be an internal ache that knows no end..
..
this thief...no ...this soul snatcher
is the literal definition of what it is to be
shameless and gutless..
a sub-human indeed
vilest of the vile..
..
i feel your angst Crim..
they came for me twice already..
...
folks like that need spiked anal beads shoved up their rectum
and pulled out slowly..
one hour at a time...
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 5:55pm
thank you dearest Naajir
i'm so sad this has happened to you as well
yeah I believe or not pleaded to the gods
to give me answers about this
they said this is a deluded being who did this
& it will be resolved & for the moment it is
but my eyes are open now..
love Crimsin
i'm so sad this has happened to you as well
yeah I believe or not pleaded to the gods
to give me answers about this
they said this is a deluded being who did this
& it will be resolved & for the moment it is
but my eyes are open now..
love Crimsin
Re. The Raped Pages
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 9:50am
To take your pain/intense emotions and wear it is as their own, is beyond the fucking pale! Superb write. As cutting as their imagination is blunt. And yes, your "protectors" would go to war...
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:02pm
thank you dearest Rob it does feel like someone
stole my skin & paraded around in it with pieces
of my soul grotesquely bleeding out..
my demons are on it..
love Brenda
stole my skin & paraded around in it with pieces
of my soul grotesquely bleeding out..
my demons are on it..
love Brenda
Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 12:12pm
Its a wonderful poem my dear lovely lady. It angers me that people steal your work. I completely agree with Hades... They need to Fuck off and go pay their dues. Keep writing kick ass art.
Love you lady.
Love you lady.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:04pm
thank you beautiful Jade I agree with you & Hades as well
my demons however are not satisfied that they just fuck off
they want to see this person lose their mind then claw their way back
from the brink of insanity maybe then they can write..
love Crimsin
my demons however are not satisfied that they just fuck off
they want to see this person lose their mind then claw their way back
from the brink of insanity maybe then they can write..
love Crimsin
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:13pm
thank you dearest John yes it feels as my soul was raped
I still feel exposed but i'm not going to stop writing..
love Crimsin
I still feel exposed but i'm not going to stop writing..
love Crimsin
Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 12:57pm
Wow ... this is awesome ... how to take a stand poetically against such thievery. Well done my poetess, well done!
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:16pm
I wasn't going to write until this was resolved
for the moment it was taken care of yesterday
& I felt I needed to write but the only thing coming to me
was this letter to this delusional individual..
love Crimsin
for the moment it was taken care of yesterday
& I felt I needed to write but the only thing coming to me
was this letter to this delusional individual..
love Crimsin
Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 1:54pm
Few things piss me off more than this!! Sadly I understand exactly how you feel
becuz I've been made aware MY ink was stolen a number of times! N I won't be surprised to learn it's still happening...
I have however taken the advice of my bro. Who said, "if ever they are tasked
with proving they write what they claim?
It's likely they'd expose their deceit by failing to produce a like voice in a new piece, whereas I'd be able to prove I'm
the creator by being able to write in the exact same voice n style that is uniquely me.
becuz I've been made aware MY ink was stolen a number of times! N I won't be surprised to learn it's still happening...
I have however taken the advice of my bro. Who said, "if ever they are tasked
with proving they write what they claim?
It's likely they'd expose their deceit by failing to produce a like voice in a new piece, whereas I'd be able to prove I'm
the creator by being able to write in the exact same voice n style that is uniquely me.
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:25pm
thank you dearest Poe I agree it's enough
to make a person insanely pissed off..
we have original links to back our work
as well as our style enough have collaborated
with me to know I can bring it..
love Crimsin
to make a person insanely pissed off..
we have original links to back our work
as well as our style enough have collaborated
with me to know I can bring it..
love Crimsin
Re. The Raped Pages
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12th Jan 2018 5:52pm
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
12th Jan 2018 6:26pm
thank you dearest Ghost for the love for this write
& the energy you're sending to haunt this person
who dare thieve our works..
love Crimsin
& the energy you're sending to haunt this person
who dare thieve our works..
love Crimsin
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
14th Jan 2018 10:37pm
thank you beautiful Daniella
it never occurred to me
to have someone do this
& when it happened on the scale it did
it made me feel raped..
for a few days I wasn't
sure i would write anymore
but I decided I wouldn't let them
steal from me further..
love & hugs..
Brenda
it never occurred to me
to have someone do this
& when it happened on the scale it did
it made me feel raped..
for a few days I wasn't
sure i would write anymore
but I decided I wouldn't let them
steal from me further..
love & hugs..
Brenda
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14th Jan 2018 10:53pm
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Re. The Raped Pages
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 7:18pm
Wow... I have no words really. The humankind never cease to amaze me with ugliness.
They may try, but they can never truly own and feel your work, never.
Big hugs <3
They may try, but they can never truly own and feel your work, never.
Big hugs <3
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
14th Jan 2018 10:42pm
thank you beautiful Sophie
no they don't feel or know it
that's right..
love Crim
no they don't feel or know it
that's right..
love Crim
Re. The Raped Pages
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 7:38pm
My dear beautiful Dark Angel, one need only read the messages of support to witness the army you have at your side. It is beneath contempt for someone to try to lay claim to the thoughts, pain and emotions of another. If they truly knew what it felt like they would be ashamed. And they should be. Completely and crushingly ashamed. I love this fierce whip lashing you've penned here, beautiful. Fuck them to hell on a razor with no saddle. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
14th Jan 2018 10:44pm
thank you beautiful Willow for your support you mean the world to me.. it was horrid for Taryn, me & the other poets if not for Taryn I doubt this situation would be handled i'm eternally grateful to you both..
I love you..
love Brenda
I love you..
love Brenda
Re. The Raped Pages
Anonymous
13th Jan 2018 2:12am
Im so stunned in a disturbed way, what the hell is going on my lovely?
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
14th Jan 2018 10:49pm
thank you beautiful Splits forgive my tardy response my, Taryns & other poets here had our poems stolen & posted on another site.. thanks to Taryn taking charge the poems were taken down & the person banned from this other site.. it was a traumatic experience I had to take a few days off..
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. The Raped Pages
14th Jan 2018 12:13pm
Absolutely sickening, what some people will do to someone else's soul. What is to be gained from copy/paste?
Briliantly expressed.
I can definitely feel the feels
Briliantly expressed.
I can definitely feel the feels
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
14th Jan 2018 10:56pm
thank you graciously Obsessed One I don't know
when I first started writing my voice
was real rough & raw.. it needed work
still I worked at it & began to learn
I think this person wants credit for nothing..
love Crim
when I first started writing my voice
was real rough & raw.. it needed work
still I worked at it & began to learn
I think this person wants credit for nothing..
love Crim
Re: Re. The Raped Pages
15th Jan 2018 4:26am
Began? Dear, dear Crim.
Most could only hope to someday match your depth and rawness. Hence the desire to steal your work in the first place.
Have to admit, I've been a fan for some time now under one name ir another. Your writing had me hooked right from the start
Most could only hope to someday match your depth and rawness. Hence the desire to steal your work in the first place.
Have to admit, I've been a fan for some time now under one name ir another. Your writing had me hooked right from the start
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
15th Jan 2018 4:31am
thank you dearest Obsessed One
that means a lot to me
you have the finesse of a writer
that draws me too :)
love Crim
that means a lot to me
you have the finesse of a writer
that draws me too :)
love Crim
Re. The Raped Pages
15th Jan 2018 4:38am
that's some fucked up shit, I'm mad and it even happen to me, don't never let that stop from writing, everybody know the Real though...
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
15th Jan 2018 4:47am
thank you dearest Dean yeah it was a real messed up feeling it kind of had me down for several days until with the tireless help of Taryn we got this person banned from the site he was posting & got all the stolen poems taken down.. then I knew I could write again.. when there was some justice done..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. The Raped Pages
18th Jan 2018 2:12am
Only a talentless fool steals poetry - although I can kinda understand because your poetry is awesome :-)))
do you want me to organise a drive by ???
Huge Massive hugs sweet Brenda :-)))))))
do you want me to organise a drive by ???
Huge Massive hugs sweet Brenda :-)))))))
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Re: Re. The Raped Pages
18th Jan 2018 2:15am
thank you dearest David I appreciate the offer our beloved Taryn already got this one by having them banned from the site they were posting to as well as all the stolen poems taken down..
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re: Re. The Raped Pages
18th Jan 2018 2:18am
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my demons want to hunt them lol..
as I said in the last cigarette..
"my demons scream
let me hunt the cunt
that bled from her lips
crimson rain"
that's what that part was about evil giggles :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
as I said in the last cigarette..
"my demons scream
let me hunt the cunt
that bled from her lips
crimson rain"
that's what that part was about evil giggles :)
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re: Re. The Raped Pages
18th Jan 2018 2:23am
ok let your demons do their worst
let the body hit the floor
let the body hit the floor
let the body hit the floor
let the body hit the floor
love and many hugs :-)))))
let the body hit the floor
let the body hit the floor
let the body hit the floor
let the body hit the floor
love and many hugs :-)))))
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