deepundergroundpoetry.com
Sex of Love To Heart
Don't whisper hope to my ears
Sweet words ejaculated inside
If you're not willing
to take responsibility
Do not breathe life
into my precious womb
Your semen
fertilizing my egg
Swimming, and swimming
in the pool of my body
They germinate... to hopeless romantic dreams
If we cannot nourish
this embryo of love
then do not penetrate
painful lust inside me
Your cock of words
took my virginity
of you...
knowledge to your mind
Impossible to take my card back
which unlocked
thoughts of you
Now wishing...
I never met you
Sweet words ejaculated inside
If you're not willing
to take responsibility
Do not breathe life
into my precious womb
Your semen
fertilizing my egg
Swimming, and swimming
in the pool of my body
They germinate... to hopeless romantic dreams
If we cannot nourish
this embryo of love
then do not penetrate
painful lust inside me
Your cock of words
took my virginity
of you...
knowledge to your mind
Impossible to take my card back
which unlocked
thoughts of you
Now wishing...
I never met you
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 10th Jan 2018
| Edited 11th Jan 2018
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 16
reading list entries 2
comments 27
reads 900
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
10th Jan 2018 11:55pm
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! :)
also put this into a metaphor..
as sex being the whole process of getting to know someone..
it don't have to be the actual sex itself
but the emotions and feeling living inside... like semen
I greatly appreciate your visit!
<3
H
also put this into a metaphor..
as sex being the whole process of getting to know someone..
it don't have to be the actual sex itself
but the emotions and feeling living inside... like semen
I greatly appreciate your visit!
<3
H
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
10th Jan 2018 11:56pm
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 00:00am
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 2:05am
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 2:15am
well thank you dear Law...erence?
your words are beautiful here as well
I appreciate!
<3
H
your words are beautiful here as well
I appreciate!
<3
H
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 2:19am
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 4:34am
Just a hard hitting fantastic write. Great job as always. You are truly one of a kind. Much love and respect.
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 4:45am
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 5:39am
They are wise words you have conveyed. so true...so heartfelt...and so beautiful...I respect what you think my dear H.
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 6:10am
oh you flatter me dear Jasmine..
I hold no such thing...
but I greatly appreciate your lovely words and visit :)
Lovee<3<33
H
I hold no such thing...
but I greatly appreciate your lovely words and visit :)
Lovee<3<33
H
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 10:28am
I get a sense of "it's all or nothing" with you from this ink... def. a piece that should give the pursuer pause but I understand you view...excellently emotive spill my sweetness
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
12th Jan 2018 3:41am
Thank you dear Poetikmindedness...
I always love your lovely support... from the beginning till now..
I am grateful for your understanding...
<3
H
I always love your lovely support... from the beginning till now..
I am grateful for your understanding...
<3
H
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
11th Jan 2018 11:54am
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
12th Jan 2018 3:44am
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
Anonymous
11th Jan 2018 3:12pm
excellent write/sensible
false or true, difficult to know at times but great to be aware there are differences, action, after all, do speak louder than words.
false or true, difficult to know at times but great to be aware there are differences, action, after all, do speak louder than words.
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
12th Jan 2018 3:47am
Yes...
we can say "I love you "
no matter how many times, but the time and heart aren't put into it..
so uselessly painful... to ones with delicate hearts that actually believes it.
I am grateful for your visit! :)
<3
H
we can say "I love you "
no matter how many times, but the time and heart aren't put into it..
so uselessly painful... to ones with delicate hearts that actually believes it.
I am grateful for your visit! :)
<3
H
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
Anonymous
12th Jan 2018 10:54pm
Love teaches us some of the most painful lessons of all for sure <3
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
13th Jan 2018 3:08am
Yes it does...
I guess pain can be necessary to strive..
I greatly appreciate your visit! :)
<33
H
I guess pain can be necessary to strive..
I greatly appreciate your visit! :)
<33
H
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
18th Jan 2018 3:08am
Love is all you need - I used to scoff at that idea - turned out it's true :-)))))))
excellent write as usual 0 Hugs :-)
excellent write as usual 0 Hugs :-)
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
18th Jan 2018 5:32am
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
18th Jan 2018 4:28pm
H, you took raw and poignant words and made them into an eloquent poem to a lover. Yes, no man should give a woman a baby if he isn't prepared to love and parent it. You have such an imagination my darling. This is a powerfully composed poem which sinks deep into my heart.
Hugs,
John
Hugs,
John
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
18th Jan 2018 9:00pm
Thank you very much Dear John!
yes... no man shall create another life inside the feminine body
if he is not ready...
Life.. can apply to so many different things
such as the feeling of love itself.
<3<3
H
yes... no man shall create another life inside the feminine body
if he is not ready...
Life.. can apply to so many different things
such as the feeling of love itself.
<3<3
H
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
4th Feb 2018 10:33pm
<< post removed >>
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
4th Feb 2018 10:36pm
Thank you so much... I am very happy to inspire and your amazing words.... :)
<33
H
<33
H
Re. Sex of Love To Heart
Anonymous
20th Dec 2019 5:32am
Your words hit home; the emotions are honest and real...that is evident to all who digest your work!
1
Re: Re. Sex of Love To Heart
21st Dec 2019 1:44am
I appreciate so much... your time and appreciation of my ink !
Wonderful...
<3
H
Wonderful...
<3
H