The Hopeless Poem

In mind
A fate inescapable
to flee
black hole of thoughts
the many galaxies
spinning & spinning

with stars of mind...
They form into one
a brain
Crashes of meteors  
a disaster embedded
Yet I cannot shake the feeling...
of loneliness and emptiness
with company of chaotic emotions

Stars seem to glimmer
yet their beauty I cannot eye
although filled with light
I am filled with none
Heart used like rags
to clean traces of agony across face
then drenched in dirt of hate
Of self, the emptiness
Wringed out of love
it hurts to care
I hate to love
Feeling empty
an exoskeleton
Is there any life in me left?
a poem of free write
 thought many could agree despite the lack of editing..
I tried to fix it up a bit
but to all who feel hopeless after being madly in love
 then that love being wasted in the end
also for those who just feel hopeless...
you are not alone
Written by SourMelon0313 (H)
Published | Edited 15th Jan 2018
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