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Obsessed With The Way She Taste
poetry flattered the gate I decided to walk through and I never looked back,
until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
rich language down my throat.
she’s been there when loyalty couldn’t be,
still wiping away the blood of my own selfish bigotry.
gave me calligraphy wings when others tried to cage my thoughts
pleaded...
for me to erect straight, expand my gait and offer her a full length of my syntax courage through poetic footsteps.
i've never been hesitant in allowing her to run her cryptic tongue all over my body, in hopes my abstained intellect and unfed mind,
would master her lyrical strokes-
or inherit her hypnotic vibe in wet verbiage, etched on my skin.
I'm obsessed with the way she bends me over, positioned to penetrate my lavender parchment when she….
spit on metaphoric hands and glossed her parabolic shaft before directing her need for me to moan
a ruth-ful verse in her midst,
and I’m…..
i’m mesmerized at how she twist my cerebral joints into a symphony of wordplay, exploding on paper into lines called fragmented experiences
seducing my untamed imagination, flirting with my untapped creativity;
sweet drops of emotions seasoned in her essence... making it difficult for me to walk away
though I doubt if I would ever stray;
too caught up in Poetry’s thick preposition and fascinated with her opulent,
creamy,
sweet....
taste.
Rain
* Revised for the new year, although my reason for writing is still the same........I'm obsessed with the taste of poetry.*
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
4th Jan 2018 8:12pm
awesome
"until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
rich language down my throat." - i've read a few of these poems lately on here, i could revel in this sentence
"gave me calligraphy wings when others tried to cage my thoughts "- you just dropped imagery like an MC who just killed it.
lyrical strokes
etched on my skin
"I'm obsessed with the way she bends me over, positioned to penetrate my lavender parchment " - this is literature porn at it's best, we salute you ma'am lol.
"spit on metaphoric hands and glossed her parabolic shaft before directing her need for me to moan
a ruth-ful verse in her midst" - did you just beat us off with words...because i think you did....that's rape lol.
"I'm obsessed with the taste of poetry."- i am too and i am glad you wrote this piece, splendid job RainC_Tara
"until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
rich language down my throat." - i've read a few of these poems lately on here, i could revel in this sentence
"gave me calligraphy wings when others tried to cage my thoughts "- you just dropped imagery like an MC who just killed it.
lyrical strokes
etched on my skin
"I'm obsessed with the way she bends me over, positioned to penetrate my lavender parchment " - this is literature porn at it's best, we salute you ma'am lol.
"spit on metaphoric hands and glossed her parabolic shaft before directing her need for me to moan
a ruth-ful verse in her midst" - did you just beat us off with words...because i think you did....that's rape lol.
"I'm obsessed with the taste of poetry."- i am too and i am glad you wrote this piece, splendid job RainC_Tara
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Re: Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
4th Jan 2018 9:11pm
Sooooo stoked by your comment, samael! It was so much fun to read!
"this is literature porn at it's best, we salute you ma'am lol." <<< LMAO... a girl does try!!!!😉 Thank you for dropping charm at my front door...😘
"this is literature porn at it's best, we salute you ma'am lol." <<< LMAO... a girl does try!!!!😉 Thank you for dropping charm at my front door...😘
Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
Anonymous
4th Jan 2018 8:23pm
This is absolutely delicious. It flows, stream like, into oceanic nirvana of language...
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4th Jan 2018 9:13pm
Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
4th Jan 2018 9:27pm
This my dear is a metaphorically beautiful display of your poetic prowess..... Knowing that there have been some moments when your loyalty to her has been challenged. Glad to know that you have never lost her taste in your mouth nor your mind. 😉
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
4th Jan 2018 9:39pm
Sensual and literal whirlwind . An epic marriage of erotica and creative dexterity. Mind and 'spiritgasm' x
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
So very appetizing, richer than hot molten chocolate, melting on my tongue. Your ink awakened taste buds I never knew existed.
Once again, I stand in awe ... my palette applauds you, poetess
With deepest admiration
~Wicked
Once again, I stand in awe ... my palette applauds you, poetess
With deepest admiration
~Wicked
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
4th Jan 2018 10:24pm
beautiful Rain so sexy & seductive
this smolders on the page..
with verses like this..
"I'm obsessed with the way she bends me over, positioned to penetrate my lavender parchment when she….
spit on metaphoric hands and glossed her parabolic shaft before directing her need for me to moan
a ruth-ful verse in her midst, "
mm no one bends word like you do..
love Brenda
this smolders on the page..
with verses like this..
"I'm obsessed with the way she bends me over, positioned to penetrate my lavender parchment when she….
spit on metaphoric hands and glossed her parabolic shaft before directing her need for me to moan
a ruth-ful verse in her midst, "
mm no one bends word like you do..
love Brenda
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
4th Jan 2018 11:15pm
Mmmmm gimme some that yummy poetry, lube my mental with slow strokes so I can ejaculate some pulsatin thoughts! lol... Hottness my dear lady!!
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
5th Jan 2018 6:11am
Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
5th Jan 2018 11:51am
guuuuuuuuurl
i'm so trading in my erectile dysfunction muse lol my pen is so limp atm.
this is just gorgeously sensual, rainy lady
i remember the first write was equally striking.
bloody hell
I'm keeping this one
xo
i'm so trading in my erectile dysfunction muse lol my pen is so limp atm.
this is just gorgeously sensual, rainy lady
i remember the first write was equally striking.
bloody hell
I'm keeping this one
xo
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
5th Jan 2018 3:00pm
Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
6th Jan 2018 5:19am
A picture paints a thousand words but this amazing poem paints a thousand pictures...a very clever and beautifully constructed write Rain.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
7th Jan 2018 5:00am
hooked from the first!!
"poetry flattered the gate I decided to walk through and I never looked back,
until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
rich language down my throat. "
just to be a voyeur to see how poetry seduces your quill
is a true pleasure Tara..
exquisite and inspiring
"poetry flattered the gate I decided to walk through and I never looked back,
until she straddled my face and spewed her ambrosial...
rich language down my throat. "
just to be a voyeur to see how poetry seduces your quill
is a true pleasure Tara..
exquisite and inspiring
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
20th Jan 2018 1:53pm
Once again, Tara, I'm immersed in rapturous sensations as I read your melting words. Beautiful, just beautiful.
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6th Feb 2018 8:25pm
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23rd May 2018 10:15am
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17th Oct 2018 5:39pm
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
1st Sep 2019 8:15am
I am detecting a most positive high that comes from soaking up poetry. A grand success in a writer’s ability to move you.
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
29th Nov 2019 9:20pm
the erotic words in between the lines heats the cool spots on the mind
well done
well done
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
17th Dec 2019 10:40am
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
30th Dec 2019 5:47am
Looked anew at this. I didn’t review my original comment first.
The air is strong with you channeling your inner Maya. Angelou.
The air is strong with you channeling your inner Maya. Angelou.
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
30th Jul 2020 1:06pm
An erotic masterpiece. Thanks for allowing me, as a reader, to be brought inside the journey. (Peace, oral)
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13th Jan 2022 1:41am
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
21st Apr 2022 10:20pm
Beautifully expressed, Oh, the wonder of tasting poetry. Hugs and peace, (O)
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
10th Mar 2023 3:03am
You are an exceptional writer. The journeys you allow me to explore and admirable to say the least. You are truly phenomenal, Rain! ♥️
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Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
2nd Jul 2023 8:07pm
A poem that describes a 'love affair with poetry' that is couched in erotic terms, portraying poetry as a man).
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17th Mar 2024 4:30am
Re. Obsessed With The Way She Taste
31st Mar 2024 2:49am
Years.... belated thank you, Poets! I appreciate the poetic love from every single one of you ! ❤️