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Berserkers
my rage has bled dry
my quill cut its throat
it speaks sideways now
born of pain shut out
it festers & rises
then boils over as anger
my fury to slash & burn
is well veiled
hidden in metaphors
it speaks politely no more fuck yous
to reach in & slice
using a switchblade tongue
when someone stabs me
I keep my cool
then with a wink
& a giggle
whisper my demons
are coming for you
I tremble with excitement
as they start to speak
fuck with me
& you'll meet the beast
the one I conceal
behind well polished words
here's a secret
they're truly maggots
spewed from the cocks
of beserkers
demons walk in me
talk in me
& if you want to fuck around
they will leave your verses hollow
listen close, there's a curse here
your finesse now gone
you stumble & falter
you grapple with words
but they beat your ass
you're their bitch
they your Master
while the muse whispers
in the ears of others
you're left a silent
& jilted lover
I speak for the most vile
so come for me I dare you
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Re. Berserkers
Anonymous
28th Dec 2017 8:12am
lot finely tuned anger in this!
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28th Dec 2017 8:16am
thank you dearest Rob
this write is paranoia & anger inspired..
most of my rage stems from pain..
love Brenda
this write is paranoia & anger inspired..
most of my rage stems from pain..
love Brenda
Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 8:52am
"then with a wink
& a giggle
whisper my demons
are coming for you"
my lovely crim...looks like you became the demon master in the end.. after all...a church in Paris has a pedestal with a demon forced to hold the words of the priest....now they must hold the words of the crimson priestess...
loving at(one)ment
-Jeff
& a giggle
whisper my demons
are coming for you"
my lovely crim...looks like you became the demon master in the end.. after all...a church in Paris has a pedestal with a demon forced to hold the words of the priest....now they must hold the words of the crimson priestess...
loving at(one)ment
-Jeff
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Re: Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 9:46am
thank you dearest Jeff
love that you showed love for this dark & angry write..
interesting bit of knowledge I deeply appreciate you sharing..
love Crim
love that you showed love for this dark & angry write..
interesting bit of knowledge I deeply appreciate you sharing..
love Crim
Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 9:01am
maggots
spewed from the cocks
of beserkers
^^^^^
i cackled like a damn hag ltm
omg you are friggin classic, beautiful one.
this is goddamn kick ass.
love it
spewed from the cocks
of beserkers
^^^^^
i cackled like a damn hag ltm
omg you are friggin classic, beautiful one.
this is goddamn kick ass.
love it
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Re: Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 9:49am
thank you beautiful one
giggling madly with you
that was on my my favored lines here too
I'm aglow from your gorgeous comment :)
love you lady..
Brenda
giggling madly with you
that was on my my favored lines here too
I'm aglow from your gorgeous comment :)
love you lady..
Brenda
Re. Berserkers
careful dearest poetess
curses can often land on your own head..
I trust this was written in anger
& that you wouldn't really
wish that on anyone..
awesome vent..
~Raven
curses can often land on your own head..
I trust this was written in anger
& that you wouldn't really
wish that on anyone..
awesome vent..
~Raven
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Re: Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 9:51am
thank you beautiful Raven
I did think of that before posting
but decided this person was deserving
& the powers that be would honor that..
I deeply appreciate your thoughts..
love Crim
I did think of that before posting
but decided this person was deserving
& the powers that be would honor that..
I deeply appreciate your thoughts..
love Crim
Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 11:22am
Hmm.... in one simple description...
Fucking fantastically brutal!
Gosh... this was a very cool write
Love, love, & admirations!
Hanuel
Fucking fantastically brutal!
Gosh... this was a very cool write
Love, love, & admirations!
Hanuel
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28th Dec 2017 6:56pm
thank you graciously beautiful Hanuel
your thoughts are deeply cherished..
love Crim
your thoughts are deeply cherished..
love Crim
Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 11:50am
That's a dare, I'm no where near interested in taking on!! Nope, call me whatever u want, I'm staying far say from that shit my dear! lol another hardcore classic....
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28th Dec 2017 6:57pm
Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 1:18pm
Tell it lovely poetess ! Karma is a bitch my dear , and it's spelled ' fuck off " . Sometimes left to their devices people fall down on their own . Know this, if you ever need another sword, I'm all in !
Well executed as always
~Wicked
P.s.
Note to self ... never even piss you off ;)
Well executed as always
~Wicked
P.s.
Note to self ... never even piss you off ;)
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Re: Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 6:58pm
thank you dearest Wicked One
yes in reality I wouldn't wish
this particular curse on anyone..
I deeply cherish your presence on my pages..
love Crim
yes in reality I wouldn't wish
this particular curse on anyone..
I deeply cherish your presence on my pages..
love Crim
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28th Dec 2017 1:42pm
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28th Dec 2017 6:59pm
Re. Berserkers
Anonymous
28th Dec 2017 3:37pm
And there she is in all her spectacular glory. Wrapped in the fiery cloak of her brilliance. This right here, this is why I persistently call you my Dark Angel. Nobody breathes anger and darkness on the page with such beauty, my beautiful one. Crack that whip and let 'em feel the sting. I do so love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Berserkers
28th Dec 2017 7:02pm
aw thank you beautiful Willow
I love that you call me your Dark Angel..
may our pens always bleed so beautifully..
I love you..
Brenda
I love that you call me your Dark Angel..
may our pens always bleed so beautifully..
I love you..
Brenda
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 10:01am
Ooooof this was intense Crimsin! Had me feeling all sorts! Great write as always! Xo
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31st Dec 2017 5:29am
thank you beautiful Star
for such a wonderful response to this write..
love Crim
for such a wonderful response to this write..
love Crim
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 10:45pm
If someone has hurt you this bad then I say they deserve every bit of it ;)
Your darkness always intrigues me and leaves me in nothing but awe <3
Your darkness always intrigues me and leaves me in nothing but awe <3
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Re: Re. Berserkers
31st Dec 2017 5:30am
thank you beautiful Sophie
for finding my darkness alluring
you gifted me smiles with your gracious comment :)
love Crim
for finding my darkness alluring
you gifted me smiles with your gracious comment :)
love Crim
Re. Berserkers
30th Dec 2017 6:55am
I think your quill is alive and well...this ink is amazing Brenda...a hell of a read my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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31st Dec 2017 5:31am
Re. Berserkers
31st Dec 2017 4:39am
Here's a secret, you are a master poet, Brenda. This intrigues, then quickly sucks one in to you on such an intense and personal level that even if you can escape, you don't want to.
Best for me....
my quill cut its throat
it speaks sideways now
I'm still slowly searching through your earlier stuff :)
Best for me....
my quill cut its throat
it speaks sideways now
I'm still slowly searching through your earlier stuff :)
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Re: Re. Berserkers
31st Dec 2017 5:32am
aw thank you graciously David
i'm deeply honored & humbled
by your ever so wonderful comment :)
love Brenda
i'm deeply honored & humbled
by your ever so wonderful comment :)
love Brenda
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 11:21pm
My love, this had me nervously giggling with such an evil smile...when my girl gets her fierce on, everyone better watch out...no one does that shit better than you...this is fucking priceless and kicks ass!
I love and cherish you
yours always & forever
xoxoxox love Taryn
I love and cherish you
yours always & forever
xoxoxox love Taryn
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2nd Jan 2018 9:24pm
thank you my love
giggling wildly with you..
you know sometimes
it just comes out..
I love you madly..
Brenda
giggling wildly with you..
you know sometimes
it just comes out..
I love you madly..
Brenda
Re. Berserkers
1st Jan 2018 6:44pm
"my quill cut its throat
it speaks sideways now "- woah....that was epic
"switchblade tongue" -you're slaying with this
sicking the demons like a pack of hounds
"they're truly maggots
spewed from the cocks
of beserkers "- this is what a blowjob in hell is like lol
"I speak for the most vile
so come for me I dare you "- this threat lingers in the dark as if to say i dare you.
excellent pen Crimsin.
it speaks sideways now "- woah....that was epic
"switchblade tongue" -you're slaying with this
sicking the demons like a pack of hounds
"they're truly maggots
spewed from the cocks
of beserkers "- this is what a blowjob in hell is like lol
"I speak for the most vile
so come for me I dare you "- this threat lingers in the dark as if to say i dare you.
excellent pen Crimsin.
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Re: Re. Berserkers
2nd Jan 2018 9:27pm
thank you dearest Samael
you should see me I have the goofiest smile
on my face right now :)
I love your critique
it made me giggle wildly
that you showed love
for the dark & demented in me..
love Crim
you should see me I have the goofiest smile
on my face right now :)
I love your critique
it made me giggle wildly
that you showed love
for the dark & demented in me..
love Crim