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deliverance or severance
deliverance
or
severance
for you to choose
for both
let you
move on
and
as they say
time
is one conveyor belt
will drag you
regardless
that is
without any regard
severance
by choice
is good
all you have to do
just like the psycho from Saw
says
free up yourself
from the chains
before your limit of tolerance
gets you
if you get through
you'll only end up
with some loss of a body part
but if that is what
it takes
then
that is
what it takes
deliverance
on the other hand
is better
i believe
slow grind
but grind it is
and no
freedom won't come
like a marine seals rescue
more
like slow dawn of summer
in the arctic
so
keep up
the grind
i say
one breath
at a time
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Re. deliverance or severance
27th Dec 2017 9:39pm
damn it if this wasn't
what I need to hear today..
wise words..
"freedom won't come
like a marine seals rescue
more
like slow dawn of summer
in the arctic"
so powerfully said..
moved my soul today..
thank you dearest poet..
~Raven
what I need to hear today..
wise words..
"freedom won't come
like a marine seals rescue
more
like slow dawn of summer
in the arctic"
so powerfully said..
moved my soul today..
thank you dearest poet..
~Raven
1

Re: Re. deliverance or severance
27th Dec 2017 9:55pm
welcome
is the sight
the Friend!
welcome
is the review
affectionate.
appreciation
immense
for both.
honor
is the writer's.
humbled. truly.
is the sight
the Friend!
welcome
is the review
affectionate.
appreciation
immense
for both.
honor
is the writer's.
humbled. truly.
Re. deliverance or severance
27th Dec 2017 9:55pm
dearest Cold One
this write is so deeply inspired
every line is wisdom..
profound..
"so
keep up
the grind
i say
one breath
at a time"
& it is one breath at a time isn't it?
because we aren't promised even the day..
love this..
love Crim
this write is so deeply inspired
every line is wisdom..
profound..
"so
keep up
the grind
i say
one breath
at a time"
& it is one breath at a time isn't it?
because we aren't promised even the day..
love this..
love Crim
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Re: Re. deliverance or severance
profundity
is what you
and my other peers here
excel at
blessed is this cold soul
for the above
dearest Crimsin
indeed, it is, one breath
at a time
and yes we aren't promised even the day
humbled
by the peer's visit
humbled by the peer's review
honored at the same time
by both.
appreciation
beyond words
is what you
and my other peers here
excel at
blessed is this cold soul
for the above
dearest Crimsin
indeed, it is, one breath
at a time
and yes we aren't promised even the day
humbled
by the peer's visit
humbled by the peer's review
honored at the same time
by both.
appreciation
beyond words
Re. deliverance or severance
28th Dec 2017 2:06am
Your poems are always packed with such wisdom, you wrap it in such a fine art piece. Hats off to you sir.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. deliverance or severance
28th Dec 2017 2:22am
welcome
is the Friend admired.
welcome
again
is the review affectionate.
wisdom
lies in the eye
of the beholder!
appreciation
held close.
is the Friend admired.
welcome
again
is the review affectionate.
wisdom
lies in the eye
of the beholder!
appreciation
held close.
Re. deliverance or severance
28th Dec 2017 10:27am
Amen to to this write right here!
Makes sense to lean on the side of deliverance
No deliverance with severance
Deliverance brings many possibilities
Makes sense to lean on the side of deliverance
No deliverance with severance
Deliverance brings many possibilities
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Re: Re. deliverance or severance
29th Dec 2017 7:51am
welcome
is the peer admired.
welcome is the review
insightful
indeed, deliverance
brings many possibilities.
appreciation
immense
for the visit
the review!
is the peer admired.
welcome is the review
insightful
indeed, deliverance
brings many possibilities.
appreciation
immense
for the visit
the review!
Re. deliverance or severance
28th Dec 2017 10:38am
Re: Re. deliverance or severance
29th Dec 2017 7:52am
welcome back
is the peer admired
welcome
again
is the review affectionate.
appreciation
deep
for both.
is the peer admired
welcome
again
is the review affectionate.
appreciation
deep
for both.
Re. deliverance or severance
29th Dec 2017 2:38pm
Re: Re. deliverance or severance
29th Dec 2017 2:42pm
natural
the talent of my peer
reducing pages
to lines
in the process
writers to bits! [in her awe]
welcome
is the Poet
welcome is
the Poem
the review!
thank You M!
the talent of my peer
reducing pages
to lines
in the process
writers to bits! [in her awe]
welcome
is the Poet
welcome is
the Poem
the review!
thank You M!
Re. deliverance or severance
30th Dec 2017 6:50am
Re: Re. deliverance or severance
30th Dec 2017 2:05pm
welcome
is the Poet
welcome
is the review generous!
once again Harry, your words humble and honor me at the same time.
appreciation.
immense.
is the Poet
welcome
is the review generous!
once again Harry, your words humble and honor me at the same time.
appreciation.
immense.
Re. deliverance or severance
1st Jan 2018 11:12pm
The poet here with wisdom dripping from his pen.
Peers, poets and outside onlookers,
heed these words well and they shall serve you the same.
My sentiments a mere echo of previous comments.
Peers, poets and outside onlookers,
heed these words well and they shall serve you the same.
My sentiments a mere echo of previous comments.
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Re: Re. deliverance or severance
6th Jan 2018 10:37am
welcome
is the Friend, The Peer, The Wise One!
some review affectionate there.
humbled and honored at the same time is all
this friend can say!
appreciation.
immense.
For the Friend
the review!
is the Friend, The Peer, The Wise One!
some review affectionate there.
humbled and honored at the same time is all
this friend can say!
appreciation.
immense.
For the Friend
the review!