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Liar
I'm not done with you!
I'm air and water always blue.
Let me begin with hatred and other details most definitely authored by you.
Reflection,
Disguste.
Truth,
Mistrust.
Vein... thirsty.
I took a look among us
We have no equal.
Nothing to read, no shity sequel.
Only circumstances I will in our favor.
Holding you down and dulling your flavor.
Slime you intake,
Result?? Mistake.
We'll save the troubles and calm the wake.
A Storm behind Rays blinding and warm.
Hunting....
Always and forever.
I'm air and water always blue.
Let me begin with hatred and other details most definitely authored by you.
Reflection,
Disguste.
Truth,
Mistrust.
Vein... thirsty.
I took a look among us
We have no equal.
Nothing to read, no shity sequel.
Only circumstances I will in our favor.
Holding you down and dulling your flavor.
Slime you intake,
Result?? Mistake.
We'll save the troubles and calm the wake.
A Storm behind Rays blinding and warm.
Hunting....
Always and forever.
Published 27th Dec 2017
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27th Dec 2017 7:46pm
love the rage & powerful flow..
"I took a look among us
We have no equal.
Nothing to read, no shity sequel.
Only circumstances I will in our favor.
Holding you down and dulling your flavor"
welcome to DU..
your flavor is awesome..
love Crim
"I took a look among us
We have no equal.
Nothing to read, no shity sequel.
Only circumstances I will in our favor.
Holding you down and dulling your flavor"
welcome to DU..
your flavor is awesome..
love Crim
27th Dec 2017 10:51pm
Isn't it great when someone reads your shit and feels what you intended to project. Especially when it comes out so harsh and eternal for me, I wouldn't even be empowered and gifted, "humble opinion by the way"if people like you didn't exist.. the words leave my hands as jagged and real as the insperation is infused into my soul... much love and respect..pass that shit on!!!! We have the power to make other humans feel what ever we so choose to impart. Trips me out sometimes LMAO
27th Dec 2017 11:08pm
love your reply..
yes I could feel you slamming
the pages with your fists
as you thought them & inked them out..
your energy is a powerful one..
fucking fantastic ink..
love Crim
yes I could feel you slamming
the pages with your fists
as you thought them & inked them out..
your energy is a powerful one..
fucking fantastic ink..
love Crim
28th Dec 2017 1:47am
yes
refreshingly unique
i found the ink here
regardless of the genre it is submitted under.
expression.
delivered.
welcome
to the community
deepside
refreshingly unique
i found the ink here
regardless of the genre it is submitted under.
expression.
delivered.
welcome
to the community
deepside
28th Dec 2017 2:33am
Gratitude!!
I never keep or copyright my trash lmao!! Everything I put out is for others like us,or anyone who happens to cross paths with my pen.
Shit it's therapy for me lol
I never keep or copyright my trash lmao!! Everything I put out is for others like us,or anyone who happens to cross paths with my pen.
Shit it's therapy for me lol
28th Dec 2017 2:24am
Your input appreciated!!
Mrs 2000 days and counting. I see you out there in the knowing and such. Lol a
Mrs 2000 days and counting. I see you out there in the knowing and such. Lol a
love this full on onslaught
of rage & emotion
felt its sting..
trademark to any great anger poem
it has to make you feel punched in the gut..
killer lines..
"Reflection,
Disguste.
Truth,
Mistrust.
Vein... thirsty."
I caught that veins thirsty line
mine phene every day..
slamming great entry here at DU..
~Raven
of rage & emotion
felt its sting..
trademark to any great anger poem
it has to make you feel punched in the gut..
killer lines..
"Reflection,
Disguste.
Truth,
Mistrust.
Vein... thirsty."
I caught that veins thirsty line
mine phene every day..
slamming great entry here at DU..
~Raven
28th Dec 2017 9:55am
Thank you my friend,
My only drawback is that I am kinda dyslexic and my soul surpassed my vocabulary when I was born lol.
My only drawback is that I am kinda dyslexic and my soul surpassed my vocabulary when I was born lol.
28th Dec 2017 10:03am
don't feel bad I write
complete lines out of order..
you write fiercely
so that your readers can feel you..
a true poet & artist..
~Raven
complete lines out of order..
you write fiercely
so that your readers can feel you..
a true poet & artist..
~Raven
28th Dec 2017 10:28am
Much respect. I look forward to checking out your digs and riding with you at whatever speed your intentions scrape my brain along.
