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It tastes better when you say it like that
Break me like banter
right across your knee
wear me like the tread of tires
bald
busting with gnawed metal wire
i'll whisk you
like cake batter
dip my finger
to taste
crawl
like in a cabaret
at curtain call
you're my final number
be my water runway
i'll be your Cessna seaair 208
making sky approach
you be my alcoholic
i'll be your all day happy hour
with top shelf liquor
in the tall glasses
go ahead
take a drink
chevron to my direction
the "pew" noise from my Tommy gun
fiberglass
asphalt shingles to your roof
so i can guard you from the rain and sun
right across your knee
wear me like the tread of tires
bald
busting with gnawed metal wire
i'll whisk you
like cake batter
dip my finger
to taste
crawl
like in a cabaret
at curtain call
you're my final number
be my water runway
i'll be your Cessna seaair 208
making sky approach
you be my alcoholic
i'll be your all day happy hour
with top shelf liquor
in the tall glasses
go ahead
take a drink
chevron to my direction
the "pew" noise from my Tommy gun
fiberglass
asphalt shingles to your roof
so i can guard you from the rain and sun
Published 17th Dec 2017
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17th Dec 2017 10:08pm
i'm drinking you in poetically speaking..
"you be my alcoholic
i'll be your all day happy hour
with top shelf liquor
in the tall glasses
go ahead
take a drink"
& i'm drunk on you flavor..
fantastic write
you really got down..
love Crim
"you be my alcoholic
i'll be your all day happy hour
with top shelf liquor
in the tall glasses
go ahead
take a drink"
& i'm drunk on you flavor..
fantastic write
you really got down..
love Crim
Alcohol percentage in mirror may be higher that it appears lol
thank you Crim, you have the most positive reinforcement out of anyone i've ever known.
thank you Crim, you have the most positive reinforcement out of anyone i've ever known.
17th Dec 2017 10:10pm
Ahhh! Again, that title is gold!
"i'll whisk you
like cake batter
dip my finger
to taste " This is pure delight! Most excellent :)
"fiberglass
asphalt shingles to your roof
so i can guard you from the rain and sun " i livein a very eco-concious area where people have a lot of money. Tons of rich retirees with solar paneled roofs, reminds me of Washington state.
"i'll whisk you
like cake batter
dip my finger
to taste " This is pure delight! Most excellent :)
"fiberglass
asphalt shingles to your roof
so i can guard you from the rain and sun " i livein a very eco-concious area where people have a lot of money. Tons of rich retirees with solar paneled roofs, reminds me of Washington state.
18th Dec 2017 7:06pm
Solar panels rock. i've watched a million and one videos on power storage and power grid tie inverter's..but it's too rich for my blood...i'll settle for recycling plastic and standing there breaking the glass in the green and clear bins until someone tells me to stop ...but it's so fun lol.
thanks for reading
thanks for reading
