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Cross me like your tongue to glue
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Cross me like your tongue to glue
And this cold
swallows me
as lovers
in her envelopes
clasp
Written by
samael
(Zaroff poetry)
Published
18th Dec 2017
| Edited
19th Dec 2017
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Re. Cross me like your tongue to glue
Ahavati
19th Dec 2017 1:36pm
Well done! But I would lose "like" for as to play into the assonance of a and consonance if s.
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Re: Re. Cross me like your tongue to glue
samael
(Zaroff poetry)
19th Dec 2017 1:44pm
Good call, thanks.
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Re: Re. Cross me like your tongue to glue
Ahavati
19th Dec 2017 1:47pm
No problem.
If you're going to use a vs as, I'd semicolon to connect the two independent clauses.
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