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Red Skies of Night
From native acacias, local sycamore
and tamarisk trees come homes;
Universe Houses, places we sail
from red skies of morning:
swells, storms, and loneliness
To joined timbers forming walls;
drawings piercing their frames
under a roof retaining warmth
Coffee table books, photography
bound leaflets of splayed poetry
Hand-written words curled as
autumn leaves across pages
An open floor plan, resplendent
increments of light and shadow
creative in movement
.
Many years have passed
our lives, but those remaining
foretell great happiness;
Their red skies of night
a sailor's delight, coming
forth to carry Us Home
~
For J, my Heart's Compass, always. . .
Image: Wassily Kandinsky
and tamarisk trees come homes;
Universe Houses, places we sail
from red skies of morning:
swells, storms, and loneliness
To joined timbers forming walls;
drawings piercing their frames
under a roof retaining warmth
Coffee table books, photography
bound leaflets of splayed poetry
Hand-written words curled as
autumn leaves across pages
An open floor plan, resplendent
increments of light and shadow
creative in movement
.
Many years have passed
our lives, but those remaining
foretell great happiness;
Their red skies of night
a sailor's delight, coming
forth to carry Us Home
~
For J, my Heart's Compass, always. . .
Image: Wassily Kandinsky
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Re. Red Skies of Night
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 4:16pm
A wonderful poem to wake up to this morning.
What could be more warm and inviting than a great hall built on a foundation of Love and accentuated with Creativity?
I Love You. 💜
What could be more warm and inviting than a great hall built on a foundation of Love and accentuated with Creativity?
I Love You. 💜
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18th Dec 2017 00:26am
Re. Red Skies of Night
15th Dec 2017 4:31pm
I really enjoy that second stanza
"Universe Houses, places we sail
from red skies of morning:
swells, storms, and loneliness"- it took me right to my childhood home when i was three years old looking off in the woods on the horizon at sunrise out from under our carport,dogs playing,just past dads motorcycle.
...awesome
"Hand-written words curled as
autumn leaves across pages" - your making me want to press flowers and write like a madman lol.
"Their red skies of night
a sailor's delight, coming
forth to carry Us Home "- reminds me of a beacon shining in the distance almost lighthouse like.
fantastic writing Ahavati
"Universe Houses, places we sail
from red skies of morning:
swells, storms, and loneliness"- it took me right to my childhood home when i was three years old looking off in the woods on the horizon at sunrise out from under our carport,dogs playing,just past dads motorcycle.
...awesome
"Hand-written words curled as
autumn leaves across pages" - your making me want to press flowers and write like a madman lol.
"Their red skies of night
a sailor's delight, coming
forth to carry Us Home "- reminds me of a beacon shining in the distance almost lighthouse like.
fantastic writing Ahavati
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When a poem spurns another poet to action it's one of the greatest compliments. Thank you.
Re. Red Skies of Night
15th Dec 2017 7:23pm
wow that was beautiful - I could see it, sense it feel it - wonderful :-)))
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Re: Re. Red Skies of Night
18th Dec 2017 00:28am
A poem emanating a frequency that can relate the experience is one of the greatest compliments. Thank you, my friend.
Re. Red Skies of Night
16th Dec 2017 3:28am
A fine poem, in attractive style. I like the terms u used, very poetic indeed. Kudos.
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18th Dec 2017 00:29am
Re. Red Skies of Night
16th Dec 2017 4:50am
This is really pretty, I could feel the warmth of the title, the picture really compliments it...
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18th Dec 2017 00:30am
Thank you, PoetsRevenge. When a poem emanates such a warmth to another poet, the author should feel proud they allowed the poem to lead vs their ego.
Re. Red Skies of Night
16th Dec 2017 7:06am
For me, the opening of this splendid poem drew up a scene from Fantasia- the enchanted wooden brooms coming to life. Such as the felled trees that gather themselves up from the start of this write, magically housing such talented poets as yourself and you’re Soul Mate 💫
“Coffee table books, photography
bound leaflets of splayed poetry
Hand-written words curled as
autumn leaves across pages”
I long to know of such an abode where Lovers may embody such artistic expression ❤️
May you and yours have a blessed many years to come 😊
“Coffee table books, photography
bound leaflets of splayed poetry
Hand-written words curled as
autumn leaves across pages”
I long to know of such an abode where Lovers may embody such artistic expression ❤️
May you and yours have a blessed many years to come 😊
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18th Dec 2017 00:33am
I Love Fantasia! What a beautiful comment, Gem. Thank you for that. I know first-hand prayers and belief coincide with manifestation of Dreams.
Don't stop believing. 💝
Don't stop believing. 💝
Re. Red Skies of Night
16th Dec 2017 7:31am
Truly heartwarming Ahavati! The ring of "resplendent - increments" is music to a poet's soul! :)
Again, very 'warm', a fitting expression for this time of year!
Again, very 'warm', a fitting expression for this time of year!
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Re: Re. Red Skies of Night
18th Dec 2017 00:34am
Thank you, my friend! I'm thrilled it warmed your heart and brought to mind this beautiful season of giving. 💖💝
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17th Dec 2017 3:11pm
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18th Dec 2017 00:35am
Re. Red Skies of Night
22nd Dec 2017 2:13pm
#relationshipgoals
i am so glad to find you still here and still writing and still sharing your wonderful spirit.
this is utterly beautiful, vati
the awe-inspiring shades of life is so quintessential to your pen
xo
i am so glad to find you still here and still writing and still sharing your wonderful spirit.
this is utterly beautiful, vati
the awe-inspiring shades of life is so quintessential to your pen
xo
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24th Dec 2017 11:31pm
Ohhhhhh look who's back! ❤
Thank you and Merry Christmas Eve! Happy Holidays! Happy Hanukkah! After all, light is never over - but burns brightly.
Thank you and Merry Christmas Eve! Happy Holidays! Happy Hanukkah! After all, light is never over - but burns brightly.