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Fantasies Arise
Can't put a finger on this exact feeling...
Whenever reading
those erotic passionate fire
I feel a ache down there
Yearning for a firm excited another
To taste the likes of me
Many fantasies driving my mind...
up the skirt, teacher student-
extra credit and lovin'
open wetness to wetness
two pink fuzzy sacred doors
sharing an opening
sound effects & sensational desire
overwhelming
my untouched feminine lust
oh, how amazing would it be
to be tied up & blindfolded
violated and teased
in a room full of fantasies
Strip me bare to my dirtiest of secrets
reveal of tainted mind
nude inside & out
excited and wet
reading those works
yet no one to satisfy...
this hungered wicked soul
Whenever reading
those erotic passionate fire
I feel a ache down there
Yearning for a firm excited another
To taste the likes of me
Many fantasies driving my mind...
up the skirt, teacher student-
extra credit and lovin'
open wetness to wetness
two pink fuzzy sacred doors
sharing an opening
sound effects & sensational desire
overwhelming
my untouched feminine lust
oh, how amazing would it be
to be tied up & blindfolded
violated and teased
in a room full of fantasies
Strip me bare to my dirtiest of secrets
reveal of tainted mind
nude inside & out
excited and wet
reading those works
yet no one to satisfy...
this hungered wicked soul
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Re. Uncontrollable Swollen Feeling
14th Dec 2017 2:41am
This is a quick un-overlooked one lol it may seem a bit rushed, as it came from a rushed feeling..
I shall come back to this later..
I shall come back to this later..
Re. Uncontrollable Swollen Feeling
14th Dec 2017 2:45am
Your imagery blew me away. A total sensory fantasia. I could taste and feel what you described so exquisitely. This is erotica as it can be when written by a maestro poet. You have me firming into rapt delight. ;-)
John
John
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Re: Re. Uncontrollable Swollen Feeling
14th Dec 2017 2:50am
Well it pleases me to have brought you delight with senses in my works dear passionate soul!
A hurricane furls inside
of satisfaction to your rapt :)
<3
H
A hurricane furls inside
of satisfaction to your rapt :)
<3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 5:32am
Every man should read this unraveling of female erotic thought as part of the curricula. Considering this revelation of your deep desire alone is a turn on and I applaud you for such an honest and beautifully written rendition.
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 5:51am
Oh my I am honored by your very beautiful comment as well! lol
thank you so much..
You see so much in the essence of my works, I greatly, truly appreciate it dear poet :) <3
H
thank you so much..
You see so much in the essence of my works, I greatly, truly appreciate it dear poet :) <3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 8:26am
It maybe 'rushed' as you put it...but it is damn sexy and urgent.
Strip me bare to my dirtiest of secrets
reveal of tainted mind
nude inside & out
Love it
Strip me bare to my dirtiest of secrets
reveal of tainted mind
nude inside & out
Love it
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 7:39pm
Well thank you so much SIN! :)
You got the urgent part right lol
Reading those works making me want it NOW! lol
Great appreciations <3
H
You got the urgent part right lol
Reading those works making me want it NOW! lol
Great appreciations <3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 8:53am
Sensually sexy H!
It's nice to read your naughty side.
My mind tingles to imagine the imagery you summon in my dreams...
JJ
It's nice to read your naughty side.
My mind tingles to imagine the imagery you summon in my dreams...
JJ
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 7:45pm
Well I'm not expecting any presents this year!
guess it can be quite boring being nice all the time lol
:)
Thank you so much <3
H
guess it can be quite boring being nice all the time lol
:)
Thank you so much <3
H
Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 7:50pm
I don't even have a Christmas tree for Santa to put anything under...
I've been nice all my life, but even Santa has forsaken me...
JJ
I've been nice all my life, but even Santa has forsaken me...
JJ
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 7:54pm
Oh, dear JJ, but you'll always have friends here on DUP!
You'll have me, and I do not forsake any as long as I am not wronged...
You don't always need presents to have a good Christmas...
May Jolly and Holly come to your holy....
You'll have me, and I do not forsake any as long as I am not wronged...
You don't always need presents to have a good Christmas...
May Jolly and Holly come to your holy....
Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 1:09pm
This is a hell of a fantasy...hotness...gotta give you props lady, you definitely are a gifted poetess...
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 7:49pm
Dear poetikmindedness... you speak such great deal of kindness!
Thank you so much for your visit :)
Honored,
<3
H
Thank you so much for your visit :)
Honored,
<3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 1:29pm
Wow that was sexy and hot. Fantastic write even if you feel that it was rushed. Nice job my friend!
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 7:55pm
Oh, thank you so much dear Tyler! You are so kind! :)
I greatly appreciate all of your words in my works <3
H
I greatly appreciate all of your words in my works <3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
Anonymous
14th Dec 2017 5:37pm
God, you are a sexy writer! Leaves me teetering on the grassy knolls of orgasms.
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
Dear poet!
Thank you so much...
I am greatly jollied as I read your feelings through my works :)
<3
H
Thank you so much...
I am greatly jollied as I read your feelings through my works :)
<3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 5:48pm
Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 8:00pm
Well dear Coffee! lol
Thank you so much for such kind words in my work :)
Greatly appreciated..... <3
H
Thank you so much for such kind words in my work :)
Greatly appreciated..... <3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Dec 2017 11:52pm
"oh, how amazing would it be
to be tied up & blindfolded
violated and teased
in a room full of fantasies"
mm beautiful one
inciting some fantasies
in me with this lusty, hot erotic ;)
love Crim
to be tied up & blindfolded
violated and teased
in a room full of fantasies"
mm beautiful one
inciting some fantasies
in me with this lusty, hot erotic ;)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
15th Dec 2017 1:05am
Why thank you beautiful Crim! <3
I'm pleased to have brought you such sensations ;)
Love
H
I'm pleased to have brought you such sensations ;)
Love
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
15th Dec 2017 2:08am
You are sexy eough my dear for a real true love to satisfy. Don't worry! He is in the shade just around the corner......
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
15th Dec 2017 2:17am
Thank you dear RoseJasmine..
Hopefully my lovely "other half of my heart"
soon announces the human existence..
Love <3
H
Hopefully my lovely "other half of my heart"
soon announces the human existence..
Love <3
H
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
15th Dec 2017 8:45pm
Thank you lovely poetess! :)
I greatly appreciate your comment and compliments! <3
H
I greatly appreciate your comment and compliments! <3
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
Anonymous
16th Dec 2017 11:05pm
Can absolutely feel your urge to release your naughty playful side here beautiful one.
Keep that feeling alive by these kind of thoughts until someone worthy of playing those games with comes along ;)
Enjoyed as always <3
Keep that feeling alive by these kind of thoughts until someone worthy of playing those games with comes along ;)
Enjoyed as always <3
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
17th Dec 2017 8:08am
I'm glad you were able to feel through my words dear beautiful one! <3
Yes, my urges shall be saved till my victim comes along to surrender to my dirty games ;)
I enjoy your lovely visits as always!
H
Yes, my urges shall be saved till my victim comes along to surrender to my dirty games ;)
I enjoy your lovely visits as always!
H
Re. Fantasies Arise
17th Dec 2017 7:34pm
A lovely yearning well purveyed SourMelon
if only are fantasies would tie is up as we walked in our front door one day and just take over.
even just a taste to tease our melting minds.
well written and sensual.
if only are fantasies would tie is up as we walked in our front door one day and just take over.
even just a taste to tease our melting minds.
well written and sensual.
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
17th Dec 2017 7:43pm
Well thank you so much! lol :)
Yes.... fantasies... driving one to the most crazy of state with its ways..
I greatly thank you for your lovely visit dear Samael!
<3
H
Yes.... fantasies... driving one to the most crazy of state with its ways..
I greatly thank you for your lovely visit dear Samael!
<3
H
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18th Dec 2017 5:09am
Re. Fantasies Arise
20th Dec 2017 11:30pm
Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
21st Dec 2017 6:51pm
Hmmm....what's this sighing for? Lol
Well thanks for the visit dear Jeff!
<3
H
Well thanks for the visit dear Jeff!
<3
H
Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
21st Dec 2017 7:05pm
a very sensual sigh towards a sensual woman...thanks for the lovely lines...
much love
Jeff
much love
Jeff
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
6th Jan 2018 2:13am
Well thank you...
Don't forget the ropes and toys! lol
It's the best kind of torture...
I am very grateful to your praise..
<3
H
Don't forget the ropes and toys! lol
It's the best kind of torture...
I am very grateful to your praise..
<3
H
Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
9th Jan 2018 3:33am
well thank you dear poet lol
I'm glad it had caused enough to exclaim 3 exclamation marks to show enthusiasm..
<3
H
I'm glad it had caused enough to exclaim 3 exclamation marks to show enthusiasm..
<3
H
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Re: Re. Fantasies Arise
14th Mar 2018 7:11pm
Oh ..
Thank you! :)
I am very grateful dear Danny..
The feeling of lust drives the pen indeed..
very greatly so too...
H
Thank you! :)
I am very grateful dear Danny..
The feeling of lust drives the pen indeed..
very greatly so too...
H
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