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Resentment
He's gone
Away
Do his lips
hold brighter smiles;
did she bring sunlight
to his clouded moments?
Burrowed inside
shadows of days
& moonlit nights
Even if I tried
to call him "mine"
Never was...
Mine
Scent of dirty hair
more fragrant than roses
Watching those eyes
closed
dreams, in burdened pain
Lashes
so long and delicate
Every miracle of that face
tantalizing
I look over again
losing self once more
when he sleeps
so blinding...
Were my eyes bewitched?
awestruck
of his preciousness?
A curse upon me
when he entered my life
& soul
In my heart
He sat so proud
placed on royal seat
took control
Now it rots
the very existence of me
In his arms, it was so warm..
Affection
Security in comfort
How it spread
Like a disease...
Weakening
He's gone to her arms
He loves her...
So lovely
His attention
never mine in the beginning
towards me was nothing but lust
I see...
it's overflowing
Gleaming and illuminating
For her
I see...
How my eyes
deceive me
Oh, her heart must be bejeweled!
Lavishly, luxuriously!
By his love...it's gleaming
illumination at its worst
Those affection
disgust me
My love, won't he die?
commit suicide..
perhaps, fall to death?
I do not wish to see him alive
Away
Do his lips
hold brighter smiles;
did she bring sunlight
to his clouded moments?
Burrowed inside
shadows of days
& moonlit nights
Even if I tried
to call him "mine"
Never was...
Mine
Scent of dirty hair
more fragrant than roses
Watching those eyes
closed
dreams, in burdened pain
Lashes
so long and delicate
Every miracle of that face
tantalizing
I look over again
losing self once more
when he sleeps
so blinding...
Were my eyes bewitched?
awestruck
of his preciousness?
A curse upon me
when he entered my life
& soul
In my heart
He sat so proud
placed on royal seat
took control
Now it rots
the very existence of me
In his arms, it was so warm..
Affection
Security in comfort
How it spread
Like a disease...
Weakening
He's gone to her arms
He loves her...
So lovely
His attention
never mine in the beginning
towards me was nothing but lust
I see...
it's overflowing
Gleaming and illuminating
For her
I see...
How my eyes
deceive me
Oh, her heart must be bejeweled!
Lavishly, luxuriously!
By his love...it's gleaming
illumination at its worst
Those affection
disgust me
My love, won't he die?
commit suicide..
perhaps, fall to death?
I do not wish to see him alive
Published 18th Dec 2017
| Edited 13th Mar 2018
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beautiful Hanuel
very passionate poem
I feel your pain & anger here..
"By his love...it's gleaming
Illumination at its worst
Affection
disgusts me
My love, won't he die?
Suicide, or fall to death?
I do not wish to see him alive...
stellar ink..
love Crim
very passionate poem
I feel your pain & anger here..
"By his love...it's gleaming
Illumination at its worst
Affection
disgusts me
My love, won't he die?
Suicide, or fall to death?
I do not wish to see him alive...
stellar ink..
love Crim
18th Dec 2017 3:18am
Oh dear Crim!
You flatter me with your royal presence...with such great words..
Thank you so much for your visit... I've not been up to spirits, but you enlighten me..! :)
<3
H
You flatter me with your royal presence...with such great words..
Thank you so much for your visit... I've not been up to spirits, but you enlighten me..! :)
<3
H
18th Dec 2017 3:15am
18th Dec 2017 3:20am
Thank you dear Poetikmindedness..
Your continued support brings me light through this piece that sat so heavy in me..
<3
H
Your continued support brings me light through this piece that sat so heavy in me..
<3
H
18th Dec 2017 3:25am
That was deep. I felt your frustration during the course of the entire read. Well done!
18th Dec 2017 3:37am
Well thank you so much! :)
I greatly appreciate your lovely comment upon my work..
Yes it is quite deep..my heart's been rendering on this single feeling for awhile now.. and your acknowledgement of its depths brings a bit cheer..
<3
H
I greatly appreciate your lovely comment upon my work..
Yes it is quite deep..my heart's been rendering on this single feeling for awhile now.. and your acknowledgement of its depths brings a bit cheer..
<3
H
18th Dec 2017 4:32am
Love lost written in your unique and beautiful style. It reads like an eastern poem of unrequited love. If felt the sadness and anger which you masterfully put to poetry. Those last lines were powerful. Your verse, whether dark or playful, leaves a lasting impression on me.
John
John
I am truly grateful... :)
You seem to truly appreciate my works to the very origin where it strives from..
Thank you fro those amazing words dear John, you put kind thoughts to my works.. I'm glad my works leave a imprint!
<3
Love
H
You seem to truly appreciate my works to the very origin where it strives from..
Thank you fro those amazing words dear John, you put kind thoughts to my works.. I'm glad my works leave a imprint!
<3
Love
H
18th Dec 2017 4:38am
18th Dec 2017 4:53am
Thank you so much :)
I'm glad inspirations are derived from this work!
<3
H
I'm glad inspirations are derived from this work!
<3
H
18th Dec 2017 4:58am
Love the way life is expressed in words by people it’s amzing and truly inspired
Anonymous
18th Dec 2017 8:46am
An unrequited love can stir such deep resentment within.
Very deep H.
Love the power in those last few lines.
<3
Very deep H.
Love the power in those last few lines.
<3
18th Dec 2017 11:58pm
Thank you so much, Sophie :)
As you feel the depth and the emotions within my works, it brings me joy... For one to have felt my words... <3
Very Grateful ,
H
As you feel the depth and the emotions within my works, it brings me joy... For one to have felt my words... <3
Very Grateful ,
H
Anonymous
18th Dec 2017 3:54pm
This is so powerful & the words embrace. You will meet another who will carve the love & affection you deserve on your heart & lips. My love life has been the proverbial bag of shite, but I still retain faith someone is waiting in the wings! Believe H.
19th Dec 2017 00:01am
Thank you so very much, Rob ! :)
Your words of hope brings warmth, and hope true love will find you soon as well..<3
Your encouragement and kindness much appreciated,
H
Your words of hope brings warmth, and hope true love will find you soon as well..<3
Your encouragement and kindness much appreciated,
H
