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"Living"
Summation of existence calculating-
Satan's dung
Presence inaugurating-
His majesty's anus stench from which it sprung
Came from a harsh constipation
Of brash consumption
Ingestion of lactose
In his lactose-intolerant bowse
"May you burn in hell"
Can they fortune-tell??
their future?
Operating in ignoble wretched cell
Encaged in depravity of dwell
No escape in godforsaken world!
Pitiable
Inutile
Miserable
In this hollowed shallow world
...
might as well take a sword and seppuku
Satan's dung
Presence inaugurating-
His majesty's anus stench from which it sprung
Came from a harsh constipation
Of brash consumption
Ingestion of lactose
In his lactose-intolerant bowse
"May you burn in hell"
Can they fortune-tell??
their future?
Operating in ignoble wretched cell
Encaged in depravity of dwell
No escape in godforsaken world!
Pitiable
Inutile
Miserable
In this hollowed shallow world
...
might as well take a sword and seppuku
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Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 4:34am
beautiful one
this is fierce..
so much wisdom in you
that you can so aptly observe
the state of things & people..
excellent..
love Crim
this is fierce..
so much wisdom in you
that you can so aptly observe
the state of things & people..
excellent..
love Crim
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Re: Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 4:47am
Thank you dear Crimsin..:)
But I do not hold such a thing... in this world I have yet to learn and understand...
Love
H
But I do not hold such a thing... in this world I have yet to learn and understand...
Love
H
Re. "Living"
Anonymous
11th Dec 2017 7:46am
This one certainly gave me images Sour! I’m not sure whether they were good or bad but they evoked lots of feelings and I enjoyed it! Lovely write xo
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Re: Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 7:54pm
I'm glad dear Star! :)
Thank you for taking your time in my works!
Either bad or good is up to your interpretation..
<3
Love
H
Thank you for taking your time in my works!
Either bad or good is up to your interpretation..
<3
Love
H
Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 7:53am
prophetic and desolate....the hopeless mind jumps from the cliff....a stirring emotion to spoon in the dark of the world...a bitter taste ensues....stimulating ink girly
candle light holder in the living room
Jeff
candle light holder in the living room
Jeff
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Re: Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 7:57pm
Why thank you for your interest in my works dear Jeff :)
Glad it evokes and portrays such things to your mind..
Love
H
Glad it evokes and portrays such things to your mind..
Love
H
Re. "Living"
Anonymous
11th Dec 2017 9:28am
When you've lived in the arse of this world, totally appreciate this. Just jump on a lighthouse and follow where the lights steer you from the crap. Clever writer!
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Re: Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 8:01pm
Oh thank you lol
I am so happy it has been brought to your appreciation..
Yes I shall not abandon this boat ride of life even if the lighthouse breaks down..
I am so happy it has been brought to your appreciation..
Yes I shall not abandon this boat ride of life even if the lighthouse breaks down..
Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 10:51am
You can say you are not wise but you write words of wisdom without realizing the depth of your own experience. Quite the vivid read H!
JJ
JJ
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Re: Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 8:03pm
Thank you JJ :)
The extension of experiences are never too deep enough to explore more of what world has in store for us...
even the gut-wrenching sight of Satan's Dung! lol
Love
H
The extension of experiences are never too deep enough to explore more of what world has in store for us...
even the gut-wrenching sight of Satan's Dung! lol
Love
H
Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 12:54pm
Great alliteration in this one ... "s"s and "w"s ... flowed so well from the tongue. Bravo!
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11th Dec 2017 8:05pm
Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 1:48pm
Definitely felt like anger n frustration was 'turnt up' in this one!! Yea, dark stuff the last line is wicked...I'm guessing
"Seppuku" Isn't an enjoyable experience
from a sword lol
"Seppuku" Isn't an enjoyable experience
from a sword lol
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Re: Re. "Living"
Nope it sure as hell-on-earth doesn't lol
But it is a more honorable death than suffocation by Satan's dung lol
Thank you for your visits :)
Love
H
But it is a more honorable death than suffocation by Satan's dung lol
Thank you for your visits :)
Love
H
Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 3:41pm
i am sorry for your pain...but this poem made me laugh. very colorful even if that color is mostly brown. may all evil beings burn in the hell.of eternal diarrhea.
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Re: Re. "Living"
No need to apologize lol :)
I am not too bad these days.
This was a thought which started from a simple thought...
I'm glad it made you laugh lol I intended some humor in this piece
Yes may all evils drown in the stench of constipated release of the devil !
Love
H
I am not too bad these days.
This was a thought which started from a simple thought...
I'm glad it made you laugh lol I intended some humor in this piece
Yes may all evils drown in the stench of constipated release of the devil !
Love
H
Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 5:17pm
That was fantastic my friend. Excellent word choices and i especially loved the 4th line of the poem. Keep up your greatness!
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Re: Re. "Living"
11th Dec 2017 8:12pm
Thank you so much for your support! :)
Your praises leave me humbled....!
Love
H
Your praises leave me humbled....!
Love
H
Re. "Living"
12th Dec 2017 5:11am
beautiful one
this write confronted me
with it's profound truth
I had to come back for it..
love Crim
this write confronted me
with it's profound truth
I had to come back for it..
love Crim
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12th Dec 2017 5:20am
Re. "Living"
12th Dec 2017 5:31am
Re: Re. "Living"
12th Dec 2017 5:42am
Thank you.... very much for your fierce compliment dear poet
<3
Much appreciated,
H
<3
Much appreciated,
H
Re. "Living"
15th Dec 2017 2:14pm
Hullo and welcome
very decent offering, like the way you put the couple of ryhmes together, read pretty good
decent grasp of language considering your first is Korean
good stuff, keep it up
*hat tip*
very decent offering, like the way you put the couple of ryhmes together, read pretty good
decent grasp of language considering your first is Korean
good stuff, keep it up
*hat tip*
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Re: Re. "Living"
15th Dec 2017 8:19pm
Well that's quite a big compliment...
Thank you so much for visiting and commenting! :)
Appreciations,
H
Thank you so much for visiting and commenting! :)
Appreciations,
H
Re. "Living"
15th Dec 2017 9:05pm
What a powerfully dark exploration of the bowels of our rotting once, democracy. You nailed on the head the nature of the beast. Fantastic work my darling! ;)
John
John
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Re: Re. "Living"
15th Dec 2017 9:24pm
What an honor..!
Thank you so much dear John! :)
Your words hold such great deal to my heart with the kindness you bring to my works.. <3
H
Thank you so much dear John! :)
Your words hold such great deal to my heart with the kindness you bring to my works.. <3
H
Re. "Living"
20th Dec 2017 7:08pm
Re: Re. "Living"
22nd Dec 2017 6:58pm
Thank you very much...You are too kind dear poet.
Appreciations to your time in my work,
<3
H
Appreciations to your time in my work,
<3
H