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Love Happens Haikus 7.0
(i) Holding On
When you find true love
And you're sure that it's true
Never let it go
(ii) Mr. Hopeful
My heart has an ache
I get belly butterflies
It is Love this time
(iii) Snapshot
From a photograph
To knowing the real person
Love simply blossomed
(iv) Knowing
Knowing that you’re loved
It changes everything
I now feel worthy
(v) Winning
Trials, tribulations
But you and I will still win
True love conquers all
(vi) It Is What It Is
Why are we worried
Love is what life's all about
Living and loving
(vii) Across the Ether
Internet special
First day I saw you I knew
We both needed love
Published 11th Dec 2017
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11th Dec 2017 8:24pm
Lovely thoughts given a voice. Love is powerful indeed. After all, what else do we live and die for?
12th Dec 2017 1:29am
again a huge thank you and an equally huge AMEN :-)))
wise words indeed :-)))
wise words indeed :-)))
11th Dec 2017 9:03pm
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11th Dec 2017 9:20pm
12th Dec 2017 1:32am
you are way to kind - I bow to your haikus, infact reading yours inspired me :-))) thank you :-))))
Hugs :-)))
Hugs :-)))
11th Dec 2017 9:57pm
dearest David
this warms my heart
to know you have found
a special kind of love
that makes you feel all these ways..
you do indeed win in love..
"(v) Winning
Trials, tribulations
But you and I will still win
True love conquers all"
beautiful..
love & hugs..
Brenda
this warms my heart
to know you have found
a special kind of love
that makes you feel all these ways..
you do indeed win in love..
"(v) Winning
Trials, tribulations
But you and I will still win
True love conquers all"
beautiful..
love & hugs..
Brenda
12th Dec 2017 2:04am
thank you Brenda I feel so alive - its been a while :-)))
Huge big Hugs :-))
Huge big Hugs :-))
12th Dec 2017 00:08am
So very true! The one thing everyone needs is love!!!
Where is that internet special???
JJ
Where is that internet special???
JJ
12th Dec 2017 3:05am
that special is out there somewhere - i never used to believe that - now I do :-)))
Thank you for your thoughts :-)))))
Thank you for your thoughts :-)))))
12th Dec 2017 1:17am
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12th Dec 2017 1:43am
Love is the most powerful force that moves mountains where passages seem impossible.
Lovely musings, David.
Lovely musings, David.
12th Dec 2017 3:07am
thank you - maybe everyone gets a special love - if not they should :-)))
12th Dec 2017 8:56am
These are so beautiful and wonderfully encapsulate everything that love is. Heartwarming writes that remind of what a precious treasure love can be when found and shared. This made me feel good inside so I loved it.
12th Dec 2017 10:53pm
I am so glad it had a good affect on you, makes them well worth writing :-))
Thank you :-)))
Thank you :-)))
Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 10:12am
First day I read you. I knew I could love you.
Beth
Beth
12th Dec 2017 10:52pm
thank you again - I am not really a loveable person
too old and too cynical :-(
too old and too cynical :-(
Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 9:34pm
Aww made my heart smile David :)
12th Dec 2017 10:54pm
13th Dec 2017 3:09am
So much love to this... and truths that I am helpless but to agree on.
<3
H
<3
H
13th Dec 2017 3:31am
13th Dec 2017 3:58pm
Your words always inspire me. Enjoyed reading every part of this combination. The points of view to LOVE especially true.....
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
14th Dec 2017 9:11pm
I am so glad my words inspire you - I am honoured :-)))
Huge Hugs :-)))
David :-)))
Huge Hugs :-)))
David :-)))
14th Dec 2017 11:27pm
I am hugging you back Dvid in this early chill morning with cheers.....:))))))
13th Dec 2017 6:22pm
Your talent for going from one type of poem to another in such a short time span amazes me David.
I love this uplifting group of haikus'. So glad you posted them for they made my day.
Teri
I love this uplifting group of haikus'. So glad you posted them for they made my day.
Teri
14th Dec 2017 9:16pm
thank you teri - I really enjoyed writing these - they even made me smile (lol)
Huge hugs :-)))))
Huge hugs :-)))))
I don't know if I've ever loved a group of haiku's any more than I do these =) Each one rings true... the Truest Truth!
Such a simple yet special expression you've captured here David, a very special Love indeed <3
Bear hugs that hold and don't let go! =)
Such a simple yet special expression you've captured here David, a very special Love indeed <3
Bear hugs that hold and don't let go! =)
14th Dec 2017 9:18pm
thank you sweetie - I wrote the for somebody really special - she was my muse for these :-)))
Huge warm Bear hugs my friend :-))
Huge warm Bear hugs my friend :-))
Anonymous
14th Dec 2017 4:32pm
It is physically impossible for me to read these haikus and not grin widely at their beauty and their message. You deserve all things beautiful and pure. Long overdue, in fact. Hold tight to love, David. It is a precious thing. Such warm, happy hugs for you! :-)
14th Dec 2017 9:19pm
I intend to hold on and never let go :-))))
thank you for such a beautiful and poetic response :-)))
thank you for such a beautiful and poetic response :-)))
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