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inside
embrace the lonely taste of kindness
left in the blindess i try to
stand on two feet
but questions are asked and im too tired to outlast this
holding onto the dream
this is a thought intervention
caused to find the pieces of my
sanity
the definition of "my box"
is left lonely in the swamps
places ill never visit
just grasp your reality from a single strand of luminosity
a second glance at attention
remembering long repressions
underneath the lines, hidden awareness
i am forever experiencing lessons
Published 10th Dec 2017
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11th Dec 2017 7:56am
nice digital ink....declaration of the inner to the outer...this practice is needed in our selfish world...
much love
-J
much love
-J
11th Dec 2017 6:55pm
Thank you so much for your comment, I agree it is much needed in the world today
14th Dec 2017 4:14pm
"embrace the lonely taste of kindness"- like a beautiful stranger opening a door for you and never crossing paths again
left in the blindness
the dark
fumbling
"holding onto the dream "- that's a million words said in just four right there, nice.
"this is a thought intervention
caused to find the pieces of my
sanity "-* as pieces were breaking off this whole time
this whole life
a porcelain doll cracking
casting hearts and self into swamps
with no swim signs posted
left with life lessons
Splendid write as always mariellewrites
good overall tone throughout
good structure
it's simple yet elegant.
well penned.
left in the blindness
the dark
fumbling
"holding onto the dream "- that's a million words said in just four right there, nice.
"this is a thought intervention
caused to find the pieces of my
sanity "-* as pieces were breaking off this whole time
this whole life
a porcelain doll cracking
casting hearts and self into swamps
with no swim signs posted
left with life lessons
Splendid write as always mariellewrites
good overall tone throughout
good structure
it's simple yet elegant.
well penned.
15th Dec 2017 10:25pm
thank you so much, i love the visuals it brought you, i real think you conveyed my message. thanks for your comment and for reading
15th Dec 2017 00:16am
So much like me, always searching for a comfort zone where to balance myself to stay inside or cross the line. The pain from my inside oozing from my skin is like sweat flowing....but that's fine....something just like that my dear marielle.....
nuch love RoseJasmine
nuch love RoseJasmine
15th Dec 2017 10:25pm
thank you rose jasmine I'm glad you liked this one. it was a stream of thought from years ago.
:)
:)
15th Dec 2017 3:22am
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