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Feeling The Hopeless
Korean First:
사랑이 강처럼
맘속 깊이 흐르면
강처럼 바다로
떠 네릴수 있을까?
가슴이 우주 보다 넒으면
우주처럼 끝없는
별들로 차
온 세상이 날
신비한 존제로
중요히 생각 하지 않을 것이다
도대체 난
무슨 존제이걸까?
사랑하는 바다 자체?
느끼는 큰 우주?
그 넒은 바다와
크디큰 우주도
견딜수 없을 것이다
사랑 했지만
아무리
얼만큼 사랑 한다 말해도
쓸때 없는걸
너무도 잘 앐아
그래서 난
분노란 감정과
친구를 만든것 일까?
Translation:
If love like river
Flows deep inside heart
Like river
Could it flow down sea?
If heart is more spacious than space
Like space endlessly
Filled with stars
Still all world to me
As a being of fascination
Won't think of me as important
For what, am I
What being, am I?
The sea that loves?
The spacious space that feels?
Even the widest of seas
As well as spaciousness of space
Will not be able to endure me
I loved
No matter
How many times I love, I say
Its uselessness I know too well
So, did I
With emotions of rage
Made friends together?
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I saw many introduce their language to their poems, so I thought I'd do one as well.., it may not make sense at some points..
사랑이 강처럼
맘속 깊이 흐르면
강처럼 바다로
떠 네릴수 있을까?
가슴이 우주 보다 넒으면
우주처럼 끝없는
별들로 차
온 세상이 날
신비한 존제로
중요히 생각 하지 않을 것이다
도대체 난
무슨 존제이걸까?
사랑하는 바다 자체?
느끼는 큰 우주?
그 넒은 바다와
크디큰 우주도
견딜수 없을 것이다
사랑 했지만
아무리
얼만큼 사랑 한다 말해도
쓸때 없는걸
너무도 잘 앐아
그래서 난
분노란 감정과
친구를 만든것 일까?
Translation:
If love like river
Flows deep inside heart
Like river
Could it flow down sea?
If heart is more spacious than space
Like space endlessly
Filled with stars
Still all world to me
As a being of fascination
Won't think of me as important
For what, am I
What being, am I?
The sea that loves?
The spacious space that feels?
Even the widest of seas
As well as spaciousness of space
Will not be able to endure me
I loved
No matter
How many times I love, I say
Its uselessness I know too well
So, did I
With emotions of rage
Made friends together?
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I saw many introduce their language to their poems, so I thought I'd do one as well.., it may not make sense at some points..
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Re. Feeling The Hopeless
Wow, how do you know Korean? It's so nice to know the language.
A nice write too.
Love RoseJasmine
A nice write too.
Love RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 8:55am
Korean is my first native language...
I speak it fluently, but I usually don't write much in it since I live in America..
Thank you for visiting dear poetess :)
Love
H
I speak it fluently, but I usually don't write much in it since I live in America..
Thank you for visiting dear poetess :)
Love
H
Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 9:00am
It's nice to know you are Korean :) I often watch Korean dramas on tv lol.
They are very popular in Taiwan.
They are very popular in Taiwan.
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 9:03am
Oh..! haha, you watch K-dramas?
It's very fascinating to know that Korea is not the only country that watches its wonders...
Thank you! :)
It's very fascinating to know that Korea is not the only country that watches its wonders...
Thank you! :)
Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 10:31am
I must confess to being addicted to K-dramas. Apart from being so well done they have given much insight with respect to Korean history, culture, language, and mindset. This further enabled a deeper perspective of your beautiful poem.
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 2:43pm
Oh my... Thank you dear poet!
I'm glad to see your joys within my works further than just my works, but the nationality of it..
I greatly appreciate your kindness :]
Love
H
I'm glad to see your joys within my works further than just my works, but the nationality of it..
I greatly appreciate your kindness :]
Love
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 8:52am
I have found though the words and phrases may differ the world over, the human experience in matters of the heart, speak the same language.
I much enjoyed the poem and did not get lost at any point.
Well done Poetess.
I much enjoyed the poem and did not get lost at any point.
Well done Poetess.
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 8:58am
Thank you so dearly kind poetess for those endearing words!
Yes.. the wonders, and beauties of different cultures, and ways in life!... but in the heart of humans, we all speak the same language...
Glad you enjoyed :)
Love
H
Yes.. the wonders, and beauties of different cultures, and ways in life!... but in the heart of humans, we all speak the same language...
Glad you enjoyed :)
Love
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 10:06am
Love flows up and down in every language and direction. No matter where in the universe, no space is truly empty space so long as there is love to fill the void...
You have written a beautiful poem in any language!
How nice to see people from all around our bubble in space can visit from afar and still share love...
JJ
You have written a beautiful poem in any language!
How nice to see people from all around our bubble in space can visit from afar and still share love...
JJ
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 2:51pm
Love...can be such a wonderful feeling to have, to be connected through this emotion, and yet...
if love that you feel for another is useless...it can be a curse to have
I'm very thankful for your love to my works dear poet! :] <3
Appreciate your visit dearJJ
Love
H
if love that you feel for another is useless...it can be a curse to have
I'm very thankful for your love to my works dear poet! :] <3
Appreciate your visit dearJJ
Love
H
Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 3:54pm
"if love that you feel for another is useless...it can be a curse to have"
Oh don't I know this to be painfully true!!!
There are many kinds of love but the one we crave the most is in such short supply, or hidden away to keep safe from our fears...
You are most wise H!
JJ
Oh don't I know this to be painfully true!!!
There are many kinds of love but the one we crave the most is in such short supply, or hidden away to keep safe from our fears...
You are most wise H!
JJ
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Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 11:39am
Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 2:53pm
And a pleasure you bring with your lovely comment! :]
I thank you very much dear poet!
Love
H
I thank you very much dear poet!
Love
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 2:44pm
you do seem to have a heart more spacious than space! a heart big enoigh to fit the whole universe. and it felt to me like a very positive difference in this poem i am having trouble finding a good word for, but i feel the difference came from starting in korean. maybe as your first language it allows you to be more curious and spacious about your views by tapping into your younger mind.
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
Oh dear Prometheus... you humbleme with such great words and heart you bring to my work as well! I am sure it is your heart that'd fill many many universe to have seen such a wondrous thing within me...
Yes... maybe since the culture difference between Korea and America,it has unlocked a different mindset in my works...
Thank you so graciously for your thoughtful and warm comment! :] <3
Love
H
Yes... maybe since the culture difference between Korea and America,it has unlocked a different mindset in my works...
Thank you so graciously for your thoughtful and warm comment! :] <3
Love
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 6:31pm
Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
11th Dec 2017 00:47am
Why thank you R! I love your enthusiasm lol.
I didn't think this work would receive such... I was half asleep when I was writing this lol
Thank you so much.. I really appreciate your support and excitement :)
Love
H
I didn't think this work would receive such... I was half asleep when I was writing this lol
Thank you so much.. I really appreciate your support and excitement :)
Love
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
10th Dec 2017 7:08pm
As beautiful as this is in English ... it makes me wish I could appreciate in your native Korean. Wonderful write my Little One
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
Thank you beautiful big sis..
I greatly appreciate how you seem to appreciate my nationality..
In Korea, westerners are always idolized, so I've never really approved myself as an immigrant in America...
I always admired the blue eyes and blond hair, and their glamorous physique...
Thank you so much
Love
H
I greatly appreciate how you seem to appreciate my nationality..
In Korea, westerners are always idolized, so I've never really approved myself as an immigrant in America...
I always admired the blue eyes and blond hair, and their glamorous physique...
Thank you so much
Love
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
bravo beautiful one
I love that you began
with your native tongue..
breathtaking lines..
"If heart is more spacious than space
Like space endlessly
Filled with stars
Still all world to me
As a being of fascination
Won't think of me as important"
profound thinking & write..
love Crim
I love that you began
with your native tongue..
breathtaking lines..
"If heart is more spacious than space
Like space endlessly
Filled with stars
Still all world to me
As a being of fascination
Won't think of me as important"
profound thinking & write..
love Crim
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
11th Dec 2017 00:55am
Thank you wonderful Crim :)
I'm so pleased you seem to enjoy my works even in my native tongue... But I must say, I lived more in America than Korea, so I thought it'd be hard to come up with complex or appreciate able works by forming a piece in Korean first... but I wished to bring something different to this table of wonderful works!
Thank you so much..
Love
H
I'm so pleased you seem to enjoy my works even in my native tongue... But I must say, I lived more in America than Korea, so I thought it'd be hard to come up with complex or appreciate able works by forming a piece in Korean first... but I wished to bring something different to this table of wonderful works!
Thank you so much..
Love
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
Anonymous
10th Dec 2017 11:55pm
This would be beautiful in any language H.
Well done :)
Well done :)
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
11th Dec 2017 00:57am
Your beautiful lips speaks such beautiful words dear sophie....
thank you so much! :)
Love
H
thank you so much! :)
Love
H
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Anonymous
11th Dec 2017 6:12pm
Lol, why thank you lovely ;)
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Re. Feeling The Hopeless
11th Dec 2017 7:35am
Dear... just beautiful to read...and compare the two...thank you for sharing such bi-lingual verses...a double feature at the show...
jeff
jeff
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
11th Dec 2017 8:27pm
Thanks Jeff...
It is a pleasure to bring my works to whom appreciates the different culture of my origin..
<3
H
It is a pleasure to bring my works to whom appreciates the different culture of my origin..
<3
H
Re. Feeling The Hopeless
Your elegance and gorgeous words took me down the river and showed me the ocean of love we can find if we seek it. Having read much Chinese poetry I really appreciated the Asian delicacy and beauty of this. I love eastern poetry and this was a truly exemplary one. Those last lines of rage and friendship were the perfect closing. Powerful ;-)
John
John
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Re: Re. Feeling The Hopeless
17th Dec 2017 8:04am
I'm glad you were able to enjoy my poetry even in the translation of my native language-
Korean! :)
Thank you ever so greatly dear John. <3
The beauty you see in this is only because of the beauty which beholds in you dear poet..
H
Korean! :)
Thank you ever so greatly dear John. <3
The beauty you see in this is only because of the beauty which beholds in you dear poet..
H