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Ragamuffin
She's easy with the ragged men
Sketching with an empty pen
The passers find her not all there
But turns out she's everywhere
She checks into a cardboard tent
Waiting for her latest gent
He provides more shelter from the storm
Bolts from the blue in jagged form
He takes her to be his bride
The world still crouching right outside
Their arms hug harder than they know
The streets burn while they're singing low.
Sketching with an empty pen
The passers find her not all there
But turns out she's everywhere
She checks into a cardboard tent
Waiting for her latest gent
He provides more shelter from the storm
Bolts from the blue in jagged form
He takes her to be his bride
The world still crouching right outside
Their arms hug harder than they know
The streets burn while they're singing low.
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Re. Ragamuffin
9th Dec 2017 8:07pm
Well. It could be much worst... she could be some god worshipping wannabe hippy bisexual hypocrite that suffers from a plethora of multiple personalities, and all sorts of other underlying issues which dub her insecure as she struggles to discern whether or not she's worthy of any man ! LOLZ
Gosh. That was funny to read... thanks for the giggles !
Gosh. That was funny to read... thanks for the giggles !
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9th Dec 2017 8:37pm
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Re. Ragamuffin
11th Dec 2017 1:12am
dearest Sir Crow
this is awesome
love has a way of finding us
even in the most unlikely place..
great story & flow..
love Crim
this is awesome
love has a way of finding us
even in the most unlikely place..
great story & flow..
love Crim
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11th Dec 2017 7:55pm
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11th Dec 2017 6:09pm
Crow, I enjoy much this haunting portrayal. The pictures enhances the meaning and understanding. A fascinating glimpse of hobo life. Bravo!
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11th Dec 2017 7:56pm
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11th Dec 2017 10:01pm
This is so beautiful. It reminded me of some of Elliott Smith's music. The way you word things is really heartbreaking and gorgeous.
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