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I Want Her .....
I want her...
chained to my altar
blood humming through her veins
brazen hands breaching her every defense
I want her…
to tremble and burn
dancing on the tip of my whip
a beautiful landscape of red, black, and blue
I want her...
reduced to a pile of embers
blown apart by a burgeoning frenzy,
the fire of my desire buried inside her sweet heat
I want her … until she is mine
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Re: Re. I Want Her .....
Thank you Tuesdayt...that’s what I was going for .
Glad you felt the heat ;)
~Wicked
Glad you felt the heat ;)
~Wicked
Re. I Want Her .....
9th Dec 2017 10:21am
Mmm... tethered to your alter with her glistening bare cunt splayed before you, beckoning you to fill her hard & deep, until you've climbed right into the depths of her, flesh & bone.
Hmm. Yum ! Lucky girl ~ 😍
Hmm. Yum ! Lucky girl ~ 😍
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Re: Re. I Want Her .....
My dear Shadow_starzz
I believe you have just made my poem cum to life. You added the perfect touch!
~Wicked
I believe you have just made my poem cum to life. You added the perfect touch!
~Wicked
Re. I Want Her .....
9th Dec 2017 11:49am
Desire fuels such wickedness ... I can so picture the scene ... such intensity ... bravo my Liege
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9th Dec 2017 1:59pm
LilDragonfly
I love that you were able to be pulled into this :)
As for the scene, I am sure that your visions would only serve to enhance.
~Wicked
I love that you were able to be pulled into this :)
As for the scene, I am sure that your visions would only serve to enhance.
~Wicked
Re. I Want Her .....
9th Dec 2017 12:58pm
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“ stunning passion. “
Thank you Jade ... I believed you’re summed this up in three words
Thank you Jade ... I believed you’re summed this up in three words
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Re. I Want Her .....
10th Dec 2017 4:39am
* Bends at the waist ... tips hat. Thank you Danielle. The true beauty is in the submission ... I’m so happy you got this one.
~Wicked
~Wicked
Re. I Want Her .....
Anonymous
1st Jan 2018 9:40am
To be disciplined, is always a sensual experience
And, to be desired by your wants
This poetess, would bow down
And graciously serve
Delicious read Master Wicked
Beth
And, to be desired by your wants
This poetess, would bow down
And graciously serve
Delicious read Master Wicked
Beth

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Re. I Want Her .....
1st Jan 2018 8:52pm
My dear poetess
Your submissive heart just touched mine
I am both humbled and honored by your comment.
Always,
Wicked
Your submissive heart just touched mine
I am both humbled and honored by your comment.
Always,
Wicked
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