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simply beautiful - you tree hugger you (lol) :-))))))))

a fine poem :-)))))

Hehe Yes! Definitely a hugger lol!

Thank you both :)

I've run out of superlatives. Wish you were here.

Oh gosh, thanks Daniel :)

"Climbing you;  
my cedar  
cause' there's nowhere  
sweeter  
to fold my wings...   "- good play on words and  "nowhere  sweeter to fold my wings" is one of the best lines to describe Love since they invented the heart; you just dropped the mic and walked the fuck off stage like a G....well done AtoMik.

honest critique-submit this to The Best Poetry Magazines and Literary Journals for Submission because if they don't buy it they're crazy.

Dude, I'm so honored by this, thank you so much *hug* :)

AtoMik.. such power in your words.. sweet yet seductive.. a little erotica in there.. but done with class.. this is a top shelf ink.. much respect..






























Dave

I aim for that balance with any erotic stuff, although I enjoy reading other's more overt styles :)

my least favorite word was "spotify." I like the theme of home and the subtle sense of sensuality.

I really felt like complimenting you but I've been dwarfed by the other poets. Still.

Me likey.

I don't understand the Spotify line either but I don't make that a prerequisite to liking a poem. I still might like it more if explained - if it didn't spoil your fun.

Thank you! :) Just that music from Spotify was playing during this moment...I guess it's mind of personal so I don't necessarily expect anyone to "get it". It's alright by me lol!

Lines 13-17 are interesting. i felt "spotify" should've been capitalized.

I love how sweet the narrator speaks of their lover and source of comfort. This is a great poem, and I thank you for participating in my competition!