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Soil
blistered
skin
torn
parchment
ink spills
desperate
blood
turns gold
sacrifice
is real
images
manipulate
broken
hearts
suffocate
clouds
true love
smites evil
even sin
becomes holy
together
redefining
we breed
in soil
skin
torn
parchment
ink spills
desperate
blood
turns gold
sacrifice
is real
images
manipulate
broken
hearts
suffocate
clouds
true love
smites evil
even sin
becomes holy
together
redefining
we breed
in soil
Published 6th Dec 2017
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6th Dec 2017 1:43am
7th Dec 2017 10:30pm
AtoMik.. so glad you enjoyed.. i appreciate your kind words.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
Anonymous
6th Dec 2017 7:19am
My brother there are always certain lines I couple together even when you don’t have them as such...but these here...yeah they got me...
“real
images
manipulate
broken
hearts
suffocate
clouds
true love”
Let me say they can be tricky little fuckers...all in attitude I suppose ;) I truly enjoyed this, as always...love you!
Xoxo Taryn
“real
images
manipulate
broken
hearts
suffocate
clouds
true love”
Let me say they can be tricky little fuckers...all in attitude I suppose ;) I truly enjoyed this, as always...love you!
Xoxo Taryn
7th Dec 2017 10:32pm
Lady Taryn.. i always dig how you couple my lines together.. lets me know what really speaks to you.. so glad you dig this.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
6th Dec 2017 12:54pm
7th Dec 2017 10:34pm
7th Dec 2017 1:27am
dearest Dave
powerful emotions in this write..
beautiful..
love you my brother..
Brenda
powerful emotions in this write..
beautiful..
love you my brother..
Brenda
7th Dec 2017 10:36pm
Brenda.. thanks so much lovely one.. you always make feel happy.. love you, my dearest sister..
Dave
Dave
