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Where The Devil Buries His Sin
my pain is mine
i secret it away
until it burns
it grows in strength
& bleeds black
it is the darkness
that consumes
i give it voice
so it doesn't eat my soul
chew it up
& spit it out
a spectacle
for the world to behold
it has many faces
they speak in unison
of my torment
while i squirm
not knowing what pieces of me
it will show
in agony i scream
no sound is heard
i suffer in silence
my life in precarious throes
tell no one
of the demons that hunt
chase down & devour
my most sensitive spots
they are carnal in nature
hungry for my sex
they call me their little whore
who they fuck at will
teasing me, bending me
to their particular taste
then call me to my knees
to beg forgiveness
from a depraved god
that fingered my soul
& left a hole
so the devil can always find me
when his dick is hard
the cunt
where he buries his sin
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 3rd Dec 2017
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Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Dec 2017 4:37pm
3rd Dec 2017 6:10am
Oh my love.....I squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee over the darkness in this ink! Such love for these lines...they had my cunt twitching...
"that fingered my soul
& left a hole
so the devil can always find me
when his dick is hard
the cunt
where he buries his sin "
~ how I love it when your ink triggers my dark side...
God i love you fiercely...
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
"that fingered my soul
& left a hole
so the devil can always find me
when his dick is hard
the cunt
where he buries his sin "
~ how I love it when your ink triggers my dark side...
God i love you fiercely...
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
3rd Dec 2017 6:18am
thank you my love for such a fantastically sexy comment giving me tingles imagining your creamy cunt..
I love you madly, dearly..
love Brenda
I love you madly, dearly..
love Brenda
3rd Dec 2017 9:39am
3rd Dec 2017 4:41pm
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2017 10:02am
Brilliant work here!! Absolutely loved it!!
3rd Dec 2017 4:42pm
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2017 11:41am
This may be dark but damn is it hot !!
3rd Dec 2017 4:43pm
thank you dearest Ragnar I have to admit to being in a heated state when I wrote this..
love Crim
love Crim
3rd Dec 2017 1:22pm
3rd Dec 2017 4:44pm
Anonymous
3rd Dec 2017 5:03pm
Absolutely fantastic write! Really enjoyed this one.... xo
3rd Dec 2017 5:07pm
3rd Dec 2017 6:17pm
I am with Ragnar - dark and hot like a cup of black java :-)
this is so good :-) Big Huge Hugs :-)
this is so good :-) Big Huge Hugs :-)
3rd Dec 2017 6:26pm
Right out of the gates the title has me scratching at the top of my coffin;in a shallow grave, trying to get out...the only air to breathe is words from this poem
"my pain is mine
i secret it away
until it burns"- i own this motherfucker and i'll put out cigarette butts out on you when you sleep (too much...i think not lol).
it takes me to the graveyard scene in the 2006 remake of "THE OMEN" , jackalS CHASING.
"it grows in strength
& bleeds black
it is the darkness
that consumes" - i'm standing in front of a mirror and all i see is me, my thoughts,waiting for something or someone to save me from myself
"i give it voice
so it doesn't eat my soul
chew it up
& spit it out "- i put pen to paper,fingers to keys; unlocking doors, you've got me on my knees.out come the white wolves soon to be bathed in blood of prey...run run rabbit.
"a spectacle
for the world to behold"- people pay good money for this shit.
"it has many faces
they speak in unison
of my torment" - it goes by Death and walks through tall grey canyons to purgatory...if you even make it that far. i'm not sure what they're chanting but it can't be good.
"while i squirm
not knowing what pieces of me
it will show" -they came for a show, bring out the ugly,the horrid, the things i buried in my past.my mistakes that haunt my dreams,and every waking hour in the back of my mind...please don't make me remember again.
"in agony i scream
no sound is heard
i suffer in silence
my life in precarious throes"- they cut the chords,vocals, muscles meet the meat blade.i'm frozen but i could move.they make me relive it everyday.i thought they were the monster...maybe the chanting is to keep me at bay, i'm the darkness that keeps children awake in the night,the ones they tell stories about in the shadows of the fire flicker.
"tell no one
of the demons that hunt
chase down & devour
my most sensitive spots" - they're eyes are hungry but should i let them feed, as fuel to a taker fire on the highway, burning the innocent.
"they are carnal in nature
hungry for my sex
they call me their little whore" - i do not own my lips but,quiver at the thought of flesh between the sheets, my sheets.i obey once again and do as i'm told, put me in my place and make it cold.
"who they fuck at will
teasing me, bending me
to their particular taste "- over the counter,over the couch, light up the matches we'll burn down this house.the taste sent them into a feeding frenzy,i thought they were done but then the morning came....
"then call me to my knees
to beg forgiveness
from a depraved god"-(i'm feeling i know where "bathed in cum came from" lol) make me your sinner, feed me your body, your blood,bathe me in that which is you.
"that fingered my soul
& left a hole" - fill me
"so the devil can always find me
when his dick is hard" - i'm disposable like the razors from the dollar store, use me and buy more.
"the cunt
where he buries his sin"-the Love of his Life,the apple of they're eye, if i don't take them in his sleep. ( this last line could go in a positive or negative direction with this being an erotic write lol). filled with cum.
"my pain is mine
i secret it away
until it burns"- i own this motherfucker and i'll put out cigarette butts out on you when you sleep (too much...i think not lol).
it takes me to the graveyard scene in the 2006 remake of "THE OMEN" , jackalS CHASING.
"it grows in strength
& bleeds black
it is the darkness
that consumes" - i'm standing in front of a mirror and all i see is me, my thoughts,waiting for something or someone to save me from myself
"i give it voice
so it doesn't eat my soul
chew it up
& spit it out "- i put pen to paper,fingers to keys; unlocking doors, you've got me on my knees.out come the white wolves soon to be bathed in blood of prey...run run rabbit.
"a spectacle
for the world to behold"- people pay good money for this shit.
"it has many faces
they speak in unison
of my torment" - it goes by Death and walks through tall grey canyons to purgatory...if you even make it that far. i'm not sure what they're chanting but it can't be good.
"while i squirm
not knowing what pieces of me
it will show" -they came for a show, bring out the ugly,the horrid, the things i buried in my past.my mistakes that haunt my dreams,and every waking hour in the back of my mind...please don't make me remember again.
"in agony i scream
no sound is heard
i suffer in silence
my life in precarious throes"- they cut the chords,vocals, muscles meet the meat blade.i'm frozen but i could move.they make me relive it everyday.i thought they were the monster...maybe the chanting is to keep me at bay, i'm the darkness that keeps children awake in the night,the ones they tell stories about in the shadows of the fire flicker.
"tell no one
of the demons that hunt
chase down & devour
my most sensitive spots" - they're eyes are hungry but should i let them feed, as fuel to a taker fire on the highway, burning the innocent.
"they are carnal in nature
hungry for my sex
they call me their little whore" - i do not own my lips but,quiver at the thought of flesh between the sheets, my sheets.i obey once again and do as i'm told, put me in my place and make it cold.
"who they fuck at will
teasing me, bending me
to their particular taste "- over the counter,over the couch, light up the matches we'll burn down this house.the taste sent them into a feeding frenzy,i thought they were done but then the morning came....
"then call me to my knees
to beg forgiveness
from a depraved god"-(i'm feeling i know where "bathed in cum came from" lol) make me your sinner, feed me your body, your blood,bathe me in that which is you.
"that fingered my soul
& left a hole" - fill me
"so the devil can always find me
when his dick is hard" - i'm disposable like the razors from the dollar store, use me and buy more.
"the cunt
where he buries his sin"-the Love of his Life,the apple of they're eye, if i don't take them in his sleep. ( this last line could go in a positive or negative direction with this being an erotic write lol). filled with cum.
3rd Dec 2017 6:56pm
dearest Samuel I fucking love your critique
you read so deeply & understand so much
you have a keen understanding of what a person
& their words are trying to convey..
thank you dear friend for the time
& great amount of thought
that went into this critique..
I am thrilled that you
went into the depths of this write..
you are a rare one
& I deeply appreciate you..
love Crim
you read so deeply & understand so much
you have a keen understanding of what a person
& their words are trying to convey..
thank you dear friend for the time
& great amount of thought
that went into this critique..
I am thrilled that you
went into the depths of this write..
you are a rare one
& I deeply appreciate you..
love Crim
3rd Dec 2017 6:50pm
that was a killer write. i need to excuse myself to the domination room for a dose of medicine please lol.
keep'em coming Crim.
keep'em coming Crim.
thank you dearest Samuel your comment made me blush & gave me the giggles :)
love Crim
love Crim
3rd Dec 2017 8:37pm
3rd Dec 2017 8:26pm
Hot dark write ... falling for the ultimate bad boy himself ... nicely poeted dear poetess.
3rd Dec 2017 8:38pm
3rd Dec 2017 9:34pm
Oh beautiful....not many can transfer such heart palpitations! HOW many a devil can say they desire the feeling of gravel and glass across their cock!? This is how much this write moves through me! Outstanding! As usual
.......need a swig n a smoke. Forget sexy. This write fuct the shit outta me!
Has to be the winter solstice
Christopher
.......need a swig n a smoke. Forget sexy. This write fuct the shit outta me!
Has to be the winter solstice
Christopher
3rd Dec 2017 9:58pm
giggles thank you dearest Christopher a better response I coulnd't hope for there is a huge smile on my face right now :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
4th Dec 2017 1:16am
4th Dec 2017 1:18am
Anonymous
4th Dec 2017 3:05pm
There she is...the fierce fireball in leather and thigh high spiked boots I have come to know and love. Dark in nature, fiercely strong in connotation. You never flinch away from truth or pain. You own it the way others wear their clothes...and you look damn good doing it. I do so love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
7th Dec 2017 2:20am
thank you lovely Willow absolutely love your description of me & my dark side.. gave me the giggles :)
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
4th Dec 2017 10:15pm
He'd still have his hands full. No free rides for Satan. You give the Devil his due with another thrilling write, fine Lady.
7th Dec 2017 2:22am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
7th Dec 2017 2:17am
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7th Dec 2017 2:29am
thank you beautiful Daniella
I am blushing from your wonderful comment
there is now a big smile gracing my face :)
love Brenda
I am blushing from your wonderful comment
there is now a big smile gracing my face :)
love Brenda
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
7th Dec 2017 2:33am
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7th Dec 2017 9:47pm
"it grows in strength
& bleeds black
it is the darkness
that consumes "
my dearest Brenda....the heavy heart that carries such pain releases into a new birth of creation....and that darkness becomes a light for others to see....your sweet loving heart bleeds compassion.... and the dark can never stop the flow...only you command...the devil is your bitch to control...
love always
Jeff
& bleeds black
it is the darkness
that consumes "
my dearest Brenda....the heavy heart that carries such pain releases into a new birth of creation....and that darkness becomes a light for others to see....your sweet loving heart bleeds compassion.... and the dark can never stop the flow...only you command...the devil is your bitch to control...
love always
Jeff
7th Dec 2017 10:41pm
thank you graciously dearest Jeff for such a beautiful comment that empowers me :)
love Crim
love Crim
