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Bares pea n d park.
Their they're four for seasons.
There hear Avery our live.
Dear r all so present.
Eye saw Manny aunts close
Tutu hymns witch IM raven.
Eight knot aye thee attributes
Fore too Poles seamed pussy.
Seasoned ravens live.
Attributed, close pussy parked presents.
Lead lose; read conductor.
Clever convert cleaves union.
Tanks Forza views!
Their they're four for seasons.
There hear Avery our live.
Dear r all so present.
Eye saw Manny aunts close
Tutu hymns witch IM raven.
Eight knot aye thee attributes
Fore too Poles seamed pussy.
Seasoned ravens live.
Attributed, close pussy parked presents.
Lead lose; read conductor.
Clever convert cleaves union.
Tanks Forza views!
Published 1st Dec 2017
| Edited 20th Dec 2017
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1st Dec 2017 5:27pm
1st Dec 2017 7:10pm
I find it a good example of how hard it is for someone not accustomed to the English language to learn it, understand it, and use it in a manner acceptable by others. Of course being raised and educated (somewhat) in the U.S. I understand some of it but, still become lost in regard to other parts.
I read one time, "To form a thought, convey that thought to another, for that person to comprehend the words, and transform them to the same thought, is many times a hard thing to accomplish." When I reflect on it, I concur, and would even add "near impossible". The reason for so many misunderstandings.
I will be interesting read other's comments as well.
I think this is a very thought provoking write, and I've enjoyed it.
I read one time, "To form a thought, convey that thought to another, for that person to comprehend the words, and transform them to the same thought, is many times a hard thing to accomplish." When I reflect on it, I concur, and would even add "near impossible". The reason for so many misunderstandings.
I will be interesting read other's comments as well.
I think this is a very thought provoking write, and I've enjoyed it.
20th Dec 2017 10:50pm
That relates almost directly to my inspiration for this. I was apart an interesting discussion about the complexity of language and the ease of making mistakes. I am pleased as always to bring forth contemplation.
Anonymous
5th Dec 2017 4:31pm
Seasoned ravens live. beautiful line
