Said a poet to another who deserved better

Love the undertone
in these ``quickies``;
they go hand`in`hand
but with separate meanings

and that tiny pink ribbon ...
much to decipher there

enjoyed

Hello and good greetings

not sure about the words in brackets. felt right at the time, but feels a bit excess now

good to see you around, Lady.

consider the fifth pleaded on the ribbon, thanks much

and thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts

You`re poetics are a few & far between; always the honor to read you when the moment suits you to post; always a Fan ... Devlin

why aren't pink and ribbon on a line together alone, as all the other lines have 3 syllables?

I quite like the second one. I think a title with a bit of description in it would anchor the poem nicely :)

cheers!

Hello and welcome  

After much deliberation, it seems only right to keep the stanza's fine tradition of tryillables. cheers for that.  

I've also decided the first one is full of unclarity and to be perfectly honest -a bit shit- .so I'm going to take it away for maintenance  

anyhow, delighted to see you're more in than out these days. and cheers for visit and thoughts  

I should say also, most of this poem was wrote some time ago. I tend to sit on stuff for a bit

Very astute, abrupt and to the point.
I liked and enjoyed them both Craic  
Xo Jackie

hullo

hold that thought, Lady. there's changes imminent.

good to see you still knocking around, Lady. and thanks much for your visit and footprint

*hat tip*

Love reading you craic. These ones resonate quite deeply except I'd replace 'tiny pink ribbon' with something relevant to me.  

G'day 😆

you know it's a good day when an Aussie play-write drops the word love in a comment

thanks heaps and  bunches for the visit and thoughts

Ah yes I really enjoyed the mystery of the pink ribbon !
Cheers good man 👍🏻

Excellent imagery turned lepperochan

starved eyes
bolts flying through the air
snow not swaying in the breeze

pink ribbons not yellow round the old oak tree

splendid writing , it's shot ,sweet,simple,but rich with style. keep'em coming.

Hullo and welcome

I have that song spinning round my head now, for which you are not thanked.

very astute of you to notice what the snow wasn't doing and what colour the ribbon wasn't. :),

very much appreciate your visit, Sean. and thank you for your kind words

*hat tip*

another topper.........bless ye, brOther

Hullo

all the more blessed from your words, good fellow

Good estetics....nice little accent in the end.

Hullo, welcome

and thank you for leaving your thoughts

Ahh, this one brings me back, thanks for that

I enjoy writing this type of poetry. happy it resonates with people

much thanks for stopping by and leaving your thought prints